Chuck out my pain!!

hey fans ,

this is my first upload here & i suck in writing so just check it out hehe...

THANKS TO:-

@ThomasBerryman-my aussie buddy for saying da poem is great hehe

@THExABUSEDxANGEL- my one of my bestie buddy here for da support ...love ya :)

OKAY BELOW IS DA POEM *FINGERS CROSSED* :_

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Chuck out my pain!!!!!

Always I believed I'm nonentity

Because some hurt me,

Just left like I'm snub

And some who loved me,

Makes me feel I'm not worth them.

I break so fast that my heart,

Aches so much I want to sink in the cold water,

Hope it would take away what I suffer

No ears to hear me at all,

No embraces that would make me smile

Makes me feel like a ghost,

And busy with nothing that would mean to them,

Why it happens only to me

Am I always gonna be bleeding,

this pain  that I  can't take a second more

Yearning for a miracle ,

To suck my pain at one stoke,

oh that the pain of loss

When someone means your breathe

Goes away forever

without a word, touch that makes you feel like sinking in blissful world

Now I stand here in pain

Still wishing you obliterate this pain.

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how is it?-bad,good,feel like banging my head

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