Drowning

I would reallly appreciate comments. They can be bad or good reviews I just want to know. Thanks for reading, who ever you are! And the poem starts now:

My soul is drowning

I can´t hold you up much longer

I wish for you, I could be much stronger

I fear if I let go, I will lose you to the murky waters

Of tears shed from all the broken down daughters

Paralyzed

Traumatized

I float alone; not a single glimpse of light shown