His broken promises

I've never have let someone read any of my work and this one is fresh in my mind, this is the first chapter so far, and i would love you opionion on wheather to contiune it or not. Thanks ^_^ 

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Chapter One: 

     Never had anything more humiliating could have happened to Rachel. She couldn't believe what had just happened to her in front of the whole school. Her eyes were misty but the tears where still not coming out. Her brain was still trying to comprehend what she had just witness. 

There she had been, attending her now ex boyfriends basketball game. being the good girlfriend that she was, she had never missed a game through out the whole two year relationship that had been going on. She would dress up nice to make sure that Aaron was proud to be seen with her after his game. not that it took  a lot for her to do since she wasn't an ugly girl. 

She had been sitting there on the top bleachers with a few friends that would always join her when she was at the games. The game was almost at an end, and she was getting her things to get up when the buzzer rang. just as she was standing up when the buzzer rang, and declared her school team champs, the cheerleaders ran over to the boys in the court. Rachel's gazed found Aaron through the crowd, and a big silence came through the gym when she saw, one of the cheerleaders and Aaron in a very passionate make out session right in the middle of the court. Her eyes started to mist, she went down the steps and made a mad rush to the doors to leave the gym. 

Her car had been parked close so she didn't have to worry about looking for it. She quickly got inside her car, hearing her name being called, she ignored it and drove off out of the school parking lot. Rachel wanted nothing to do with what was happening, yet knowing she was going to have to face the school on Monday. Her phone was going off like crazy and she knew exactly what all the messages and calls were going to be about, but she didn't have time for that stuff right now. Her speed was getting higher and she was slowly forgetting everything as tears started to pour down her face.

She had put everything in their relationship and Aaron had just thrown it all away. Rachel tried to clean her face with her hand, that she didn't even see the flashing lights that were in front of her. Horns were honked, tired screeched, metal and metal hit.