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My Holiday Romance - Louis Tomlinson


Hey guys! Thanks so much for all the votes and comments so far, I'm glad you're enjoy the story :') Please continue to vote and comment!! Havent been too well recently so I apologise for the long wait :( Went to see One Direction at their last concert on 26/1/12 and they were AMAZING. If you wanna know more about Harry flirting with me, just message me ;) Lana XXXXXXxxxXxxXXxx

Chapter 23 (Zoe's POV)

I walked through into the hotel and saw the same little cheesey reception man.... This is going to be hard.

"Hi, I was wondering if I could have my room back?" I ask, biting my lip.

"Excuse me? Oh hello again! I'm sorry but we've already transferred the money to... Mr Louis Tomlinson? Unless you can pay for a new room..." He replies with a cheesey, scarey smile.

I roll my eyes. I don't have enough money to buy a hotel room! Jeez, what am I going to do..?

"Look mister, I don't have that much money on me at the minute but... Come on! Please?? Can't I just, owe you?"

"I'm afraid we don't do 'I.O.U.'s madame. Shall I ring Mr Tomlinson?"

I don't want to take Louis's money but it's the only way I can stay here... I nod in response.

"Hello Mr Tomlinson? This is Philip, the receptionist at The Babylon Luxury Hotel? Yes, that's right.... Hold on one moment please."

He covers the reciever end of the phone and looks at me politely. "He wants to speak to you."

I take the phone and press it to my ear. "Hello Louis, is that you?"

"Yeah babe, look I'll give you my credit number so you can for the room now okay?"

"Okay, thanks baby. Sorry about using your money."

"Babe, I'd rather have you than all the money in the world..."

I coo as Louis gives me the credit card number and I say it aloud to the receptionist.

"Thanks again baby." I say, smiling.

"No problem. I'll see you tonight yeah? The shows back on and I know I have to rest but if I wana have a chance at winning it with the boys, I need to be there."

"Okay, well be careful! I'll be looking out for you. I love you."

"Love you too baby. Byeeee!"  


We hang up and I pass the man the phone aftet recieving my hotel room key again. I hope Anna isn't there tonight. If so, it' the biggest mistake she's ever made.


I was sitting in the crowd at the show, waiting for the show to start. "Hello, are you Zoe?" A woman asked wearing a business.suit and glasses.

I nod in response as she sits down beside me. "I'm Kelly from Sugar.magazine. We were wondering if we could get an interview off you and Louis after the show?"

"Oh I duno. I don't think we can do that, see I don't really decide things for him.." I reply.

I'm suddenly put off by a repulsive smell of cheap perfume. I turn to my left and there sitting beside me, is Anna. My jaw literally falls to the floor.

"What the hell are you doing here?!" I exclaim, gripping the arms of my chair.

"Eh watching my boyfriend perform..." She replies, a slow, easy grin spreading across her face.

I feel the blood in my body run cold and I glare at her.

"He's not your boyfriend." I say through gritted teeth.

"Well as of the other night, I think you'll find he is." She replies, this time turning to face the stage as the lights dimmed down.

I was holding in my anger, I could have quite happily slapped the bitch, but wasn't going to make a scene. This was Louis's night, and I was going to support him.

"Uh so about the interview..." The woman beside me whispered.

I let out a breath, trying to clam down. "I don't know, you'd need to ask Louis. I'll do it, but if you want Louis you'll need to ask him." I reply, as Dermot mumbles on in the background.

The judges come on, take their seats and then Dermot announces the first act.

"And now... IT'S ONE DIRECTION!"

The crowd errupts but then dies down as we watch the video explaining what happened this week with the boys. Harry came into view, the other three boys in the background.

"This week, we were a man down for a while. Louis got injured recently so it's been difficult rehearsing without him, but hopefully that won't affect our performance this week."

The other boys nodded and then the camera flicked to Niall. "We've missed him alot because he's like the laugh of the group so it felt a bit strange without him."

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