The Mistress (on hold)

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So I've had this idea in my head and I would love feedback on it :) It's only a paragraph to start it out but I wanna know what people think about it and if I should continue it...so please read and comment...

Sneak peek:

Quietly I picked up my clothes and ran through the nearest door, hoping it was the bathroom. Luck was in my favor as I slipped into my dress, feeling the satin slide against my skin. The window was open and I felt the cool breeze settle on my heated skin. Checking my reflection in the mirror, I ran my hand through my hair, unsuccessfully detangling it and splashed water on my face. I walked quietly into the room, trying not to disturb the man sleeping peacefully on the bed. Writing him a quick note, I picked up my purse and slipped out the front door. I hailed a carriage and was soon miles away from my continuous routine...

So please vote/comment/feedback

So is there anyone who wants to be my editor? I feel that I actually want to have someone edit my stories before I post them on here and if anyone wants to volunteer I would be forever appreciative :)

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⏰ Last updated: Jul 03, 2012 ⏰

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