Bébhinns Poems.

Hey guys,
Ive decided to start writing poety....
Let me know what you think...:D
Luv Bev...xxxx


~My Last Goodbye~

The light through the window makes it sparkle,
A gem in my eyes,
Though other people see trouble.


Sleek and shiny,
The perfect blade,
The touch on my skin,
Makes me tremble with pain .


The gentle push,
The Slide along,
Revealing red blood,
And it trickles along.



The pain stings like hell,
But its better than life,
For life is my hell,
Now I laugh in spite.


As the blood pooled around me, my life flashed before my eyes,
The bad times came first and I laughed as I waved goodbye.


For my life was hell,
Now I look down and smile,
At the remorseful people,
This is my last goodbye.




What did you guys think...
A sucess or a flop...?
Luv Bev...xxx