Vampvenge (Short for vampire revenge)

i wanna know what you guys think, my friends think it's realy gud but im not so sure, they might just be saying it because they are mt friends so tell me what you think

Chapter 1

The music was blaring in my ears I was ready to go on stage and do my thing and send the crowd screaming and wanting more. I walked on in my blood red stilettos, red daisy duke shorts, white singlet and leather jacket. The crowd went wild, screaming, cheering, even whistling (in this part of the show you could tell the new comers from the people who had been here before). My Song started, and I hit my pose with as much sluttyness as I could possibly muster up (FYI that's a lot in my case). The song continued and I danced on with my partner knowing I was making our dance look like it was easy (I was also wearing my Gucci sun glasses so no one would know who I was). I walked down the stairs and walked through the crowd and up to one guy with dark brown hair, deep green eyes and a body that couldn't be for real. When I got closer I noticed this guy looked familiar. OMG! It was Luke. That stupid vampire loser who dumped me. Oh boy was he going to get what was coming to him, and he was going to get it hard and fast, and I was going to make a big deal about it. Then it hit me maybe I should make a big deal about it but do it secretly and use the people he knew to do it. This is going to be a night for him to remember because I was going to be the woman of his dreams. I grabbed his arms pulled him with me until we were in the middle of the dance floor with his hands on my waist moving in sync to the music.  

"What's your name?" he asked after the music had stopped. 

"You wish you knew don't you?" with that comment I walked off hoping desperately that I would see him at school tomorrow.

Luke's P.O.V (Point of view)

I was at a club, just dancing when this amazingly hot girl walks up to me smiling this crazy smile. I instantly feel drawn to her as if I've met her before. She then pulls me into the centre of the dance floor and my hands are on her hips, how did they get there? Oh well, we were dancing in sync. The music finished and I asked "What's your name?" 

"You wish you knew don't you?" she replied. I was so caught in thinking 'what a bitch' that I didn't even notice how familiar the voice sounded. I was soooo pissed; I knew I wouldn't have any more fun that night, so I ended up actually looking forward to going to school the next day. When does that ever happen?

Crystal P.O.V

I woke up in the morning thinking 'what a wonderful day today is going to be'. Then I realized today wasn't only going to be wonderful, it would be 'awesome' because I was gonna get back at my ex-boyfriend. I chose the sluttiest outfit I had (ok maybe not the sluttiest because trust me I had some pretty damn outrageous pieces of clothing that were way more slutty than what I was wearing, but for school it was the sluttiest thing I could wear); I wore my black stilettos from Milan and the Gucci glasses I wore last night. I walked into school everybody turned to look at me like I was a God or something (personally I believe I am), the guys were undressing me with their eyes, jeez don't they ever get over me, while the girls looked at me with pure hate and jealousy, even though I really would never go near their boyfriends. As I walked by Luke and his friends I heard him say "That's the bitch from last night". Right then I stopped gave him the up am down with my eyes 'huffed' and walked off. "See what I mean?" he said in an exasperated voiced, they all just nodded, and kept their mouths shut not saying a word, because they already knew I was a bitch, in fact I was 'The Bitch'. I walked into school and walked to my locker where my BFF's were waiting for me. When they saw me they all said "Another ex we presume?" 

"How did you know?" 

"Slutty outfit, Gucci glasses and the s-e-x-y stilettos. What else is there two it?" 

"Ah. That is why you guys are my best friends", they all smiled at me, questioning with their eyes, which boy it was. I looked around and saw him and I said "That one." I believe I said it a little too loud because everyone turned around and looked where I was pointing, but I also believe I did that purposely, you see it's very hard for me to be subtle. When Luke turned around he stared at me with his scary eyes and I thought to myself ' if looks could kill, I would have been six feet under a long, long time ago, and since they don't, don't try and scare me it won't and never will work, ok maybe when fish live on land and not in water''. Then I thought I might as well take a look in his head since I do have powers of my own, thank you very much, I'm not incompetent. It's not just vampires that get all the goody, goody magic, at least that's what I call it. He was thinking 'who is this bitch?' Oh gee was he going to get it now. 'I know, I know anger management problems, I was fine with it before, but now I'm going all SCARY about it. I think I need therapy'. I walked up to him, he took me in with some surprise, and I asked "You wanna know who 'THE Bitch' is?" I took off my glasses and said "You remember me, right?" He stared at me as if he couldn't believe I had changed so much, since he last saw me, and I just walked off. Just before I was out of hearing distance I heard him whisper "OMFG that's Crystal"