Hello Wattpadians! This is the revised draft of Agents of Ki. I am posting as I edit up chapters in the hopes some of my sharp-eyed friends will catch errors or point out places the story drags, isn't clear, or you've read it and STILL don't know which character is the POV character for each chapter because I did something stupid like forget to remind you of who I was talking about (hazard of writing epic fantasy). I mean ... -I- know who I'm talking about ... but if YOU don't ... epic fail. Also, one thing I've been trying to do more with this particular book is add a bit more descriptive prose without bogging down my action.
Oh ... and possessive plurals. Smite! If it makes you scratch your head, chances are it's ME who's wrong.
Please ... if you read something that makes you want to smack me and scream 'what the hell were you thinking???' now is the time to speak up! Doesn't mean I'll change it, but often times I -will- tweak things in accordance with reader feedback. NOW is the time it is possible, before this becomes a final draft. Just remember, this is my SECOND ROUGH DRAFT and nowhere near the final one. It is a story still in raw, unpolished form.
Thanks so much for reading and be epic!
Copyright 2013 Anna Erishkigal - All Rights reserved
|Zuleikah Robinson||as Ninsianna|
|Clive Owen||as Mikhail|
|Vladimir Putin||as Lucifer|
|Arjun Rhampal||as Jamin|
|Cloe Grace Moretz||as Pareesa|
|Lily Collins||as Gita|