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[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested

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Hey guys!

This is a prologue to a story that's been floating in and out of my head for a while now.
I wanted to post a prologue to get some input and see if anyone would like to read the rest of it.
Soooo, with that said. Let me know if you would like me to continue :)


PROLOGUE


-Crystal -


As the plane tumbled closer and closer towards the ocean below us, the hand wrapped around mine didn't let go.

I was sitting next to Brian, the hottest guy in our senior class, and honestly I didn't care about the monstrous waves of the ocean that waited to pummel me.

I would die happy.




-Max-

There's so many things I wish I would have said to my mom before I got out of her car at the airport this morning.

I wish I would have told her I loved her instead of slamming the car door in her face.

That was the last memory she would have of me.

The plane I'm sitting in is about to crash and I am going to die.




-Rebecca-


Turbulance bounced my tiny body around in the seat. The yellow gas mask that popped down from the overhead bins was squeezing my face tightly as I tried to breath.

I glanced across the aisle and saw Brian holding some random girl's hand. Even though I was about to die I was still jealous of her. That's one of my many bad traits.

I bit my lip. The turbulence kicked hard causing my teeth to slice into my bottom lip. I tasted the blood in my mouth.




-Brian-


My grip on Crystal's hand tightened as the plane shook harder.

I turned my head to look out the window at the ocean that got closer and closer.

I closed my eyes ready for the impact.

I made a last promise to myself.

If for some miracle we survive this crash, I promise I will tell Crystal how I feel about her.


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fantastic, you are such a good writer! <3 all of your stories
ExclusiveButterfly
ExclusiveButter...
Jan 19, 2010 01:18
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Hellur!! this is my pick on reading, gonna read, vote, comment the others as soon as I'm done vandalizing this one.
=P
Just kiddin!
Or was I?...
-Marc-
LolaLovise
LolaLovise
Dec 03, 2009 13:04
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It seems good but that can't be the end of it! LOL
It's good!
:D
x_em_x
x_em_x
Nov 28, 2009 09:36
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wow that was amazing for a prologue
you should write more! x
bloodtearsthatfall
bloodtearsthatf...
Nov 14, 2009 04:02
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OMG!!! THAT was TOTALLY AWESOME!!
ruqayyah
ruqayyah
Nov 13, 2009 03:01
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Wow tht was wicked a very awesom start really suspenful! xx
Skye-Cub
Skye-Cub
Nov 12, 2009 12:09
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you cant just stop there!!! Moreeee!!!!
xPx101x
xPx101x
Nov 12, 2009 08:49
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You mind reader!!!!!OMG!I'm seriously freaking out!!!!I was thinking about how it would be coool to read a story about getting stranded on an island with a hot guy and there you go writing it! I saw your message and i was like hmm I hav e to check it out then I read the title and the page and I screamed my head off!! And you know what the best part is???You'll be writing it!!So I know it'll be Bloody brilliant and I have to warn you now though I'll be extra hyper,stalkerish obsessive with this story so yeah go get a restraining order,lmao XD Or get ready to be bugged my me every day!!!!
You have to post more soooon(see the stalkerish-obsessive persona is already taking over!)
Damn!I'm totally worshippin you right now and the theme is SUPAWESOME!!!!!! super awesome in other words lols.
Oh man I need to splash some water on my face before I pass out.
<3
jemsparkle
jemsparkle
Nov 12, 2009 00:20
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oooo!! I loved it so far!! lol, plz keep it going!
cookie22lovesme
cookie22lovesme
Nov 11, 2009 20:08
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It sounds like a good idea, but i don't know if that's the genre i'm interested in.

Good luck with it though. i'm sure a whole other bunch of your fans will love it. ^_^
moslimah
moslimah
Nov 11, 2009 19:36
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