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MiaCat
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Nov 10, 2009
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Dressed up like a tart
with a cleavage so deep
she is for no man to keep

She flutters her eyes
at each passer by
A finger at her lips, whispers "my my"

Her manner so forward
a rythm in her movement
thinks shes perfect
no room for improvement

Seducing & flirting
She feels no shame
After all this is her game

I must not say she is unkind
No! she cares , she loves , she feels
just as the rest

Not a wanton by will
They forced her to do so
Her virtue they did kill

She suffers but,
comfort is what she offers
each night she sleeps with tears
going hungry is what she fears

Never a family will she have
with this pain she has to live
Prays GOD might forgive

A part of herself she kills everday
wipes her tears away, everyday..
she gets ready for her "harlots play"....

By Mia Cat

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i dont particularly like this one , its dry and long... but i wrote it so i went ahead n posted it... nyws cheers =)
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@mairacheeda nah its what ever else calls me hahah kwel
nicollettenikki
nicollettenikki
Nov 11, 2009 03:21
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@nicollettenikki ur comments are always honest.. i appreciate that. thanx nikki! (if u dont me callin u that ..tc good day
MiaCat
MiaCat
Nov 11, 2009 00:51
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I do that sometime too I actually enjoyed reading it. I thought it was funny and clever all in one
Here is my fav lines in it
Dressed up like a tart
with a cleavage so deep
she is for no man to keep

She flutters her eyes
at each passer by
A finger at her lips, whispers "my my"
Truly yours NIcolletteNIKKI
nicollettenikki
nicollettenikki
Nov 10, 2009 16:45
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@mitei_blem thank u for commenting!!! im glad u liked it n dint find it dull... yay!

@biggabit hahaha...know "decent" ppl , LOL jk , thanx!
MiaCat
MiaCat
Nov 10, 2009 10:45
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Sounds like someone i know !! LOL

Hey.. nice piece

Loved it ! ;o) x
biggabit
biggabit
Nov 10, 2009 09:34
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You're wrong about not liking it....
It was actually great! I can actually feel her sufferings...
Nice one!Keep writing poems you're really good at it!!
^_^
mitei_blem
mitei_blem
Nov 10, 2009 02:54
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