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    [PG] Parental Guidance Suggested

    Part 18 of 25
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    Damien came running up to me, worry showing on every inch of his face. Even looking worried he was good looking, wait beside the point.
    "What!? What is It Misty!?" he asked me, his eyes looking around the hallway everywhere as if someone was lurking there.




    I pointed to where Lizzie was standing before, "Lizzie...person...guy...James...took...Lizzie...Ahh...scream...kidnapped!" I said in parts, it all coming out in a rush.



    He ground his teeth together, his muscles flexing. "James..." Damien spat the word out, venom and hatred dripping in every word. "W-who is he Damien?" I asked him, worry and curiosity in my voice.
    "James is her ex...Complete physco, obsessive and very abusive" he muttered to me, his hands balling up into fists.



    "Lizzie only looks twelve!" I said to him, my voice frantic. "She's fifteen, she dressed and looked decent today only to meet you" he said to me.




    "Oh my god...We need to find her! Forget the Engagement party...we need to find her...wait what if he comes for me, what if her hurts her, touches her! Oh my god Damien..." I shouted at him, bouncing up and down worried.




    He shook his head, deep in thought. "No...James wouldn't make the mistake of hurting her again, he wants to gain her love and care. The engagement party will still be on, it's going to be the base of the plans, come on I'll tell you the plan" he said to me, whispering the end of it to me.



    "GENERALS, GUARDS, IN THE LIBRARY NOW!" He shouted out in thin air. Huh? He held my hand, and teleported me to the library, were hundreds of men were gathered around a huge table.
    Where did that come from?




    Damien guided me over to a seat, which I sat down on scared. "Lizzie has been taken by James, here's my plan" Damien said. "We need to lure James here on me and Misty's engagement party, my mother should know where Lizzie is, and James isn't very clever at hiding. We go there and attack, taking Lizzie but not harming him, we bring her here, guards surrounding the castle. I will get a witch to shape shift me into Lizzie, and wait for him, allow him to come here, then I kill him, understood?" Damien said to them.



    I looked at him, my mouth hung open. Ok it's a good plan, but it won't work, "No...think about it...has James done this before?" I asked Damien, and the other people. They all nodded.



    "Well he won't be so stupid this time, I doubt Lizzie is even in this area, he would of taken her somewhere, in a forest somewhere very remote, but she would probably be in a house very luxury" I said to them all.



    They all nodded, understanding what I was saying. "Ok think of remote areas, where James could go, and get away with it" I said to them. They looked down deep in thought, "Curdle Cave!" Damien blurted out.
    "Yes! It's perfect!" shouted one of the men around the table. "Is that in the Vampire realm...?" I asked them, they nodded, Damien looked at me confused. "How do you know about the realms?" he asked me.
    "I actually read some of the books in here" I said to him, smiling. He smiled back weakly, "Ok is it in the vampire realm?" I asked him. He nodded, indicating a yes. "No...I think it would be in my realm, the human one. He had a hot dog in his pocket...do you have them here?" I asked him.




    He looked at me shocked, "No, oh god, your right he's in the Human Realm" he said to me. I smiled, and thought of Remote places that's when it hit me, "He's in the forest where I was found!" I said to him.
    I remember seeing a small house in the distance, but didn't think anything of it. "I saw a small cottage; think about it I was found there, he would go there, thinking we wouldn't ever go there for me sake! I said to him.



    "Your right it makes sense...you're a genius!" he said to me. I blushed, but then went pale, "Don't attack there though, he probably has something protecting his little cottage thing. Wait till he goes out and hunts, keep watch out there, wait for him, then attack, but do it in four days on out engagement party so he thinks we've given up or something..."I said to them all.



    They all looked at me, shocked, "That's some girl you've got there..." I heard one of the men say, and the other muttering yes's. I smiled, "I've got to um...I need to go be human, be right back" I said to them.



    Getting up and ran outside to the spot were me and Lizzie was, there should be some clues around here. I read up on if you have something of the person, you could scroll for them with a crystal with a map.
    I crawled on the floor looking for something, anything would work.


    When I saw it...a brown hair, the exact same hair of James. Perfect.
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    Ummm This Aint Got Nowt To Do With Twilight A) Since When Was Carlisle, Satan? SATAN Is Lord Of The Underworld CARLISLE Is A Good Vampire B) His Brothers And Father Doesn't Try To Rape Her C) The Vampires In Twilight Dont Kidnap Her, And There Are Many More Differences The Only Thing The Same Is The Vampire/Human Thing And Vampire Proposing To A Human Get Your Facts Right Before You Comment. :@:@

    Anywayy Enough Of My Little Rant :)
    Love Your Story Soo Far, Gotta Go And Read The Rest Now
    Byeeee x
    Love HannahMarie x ♥♥♥
    HannahMarie
    HannahMarie
    Feb 17, 2010 13:20
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    this isnt anything like twilight!(person that commented that) Twilights about a weak helpless girl in love with a hot vampire kid :] This is a book about a strong girl trying to save the ones she loves. plus i dont think youll c anyone in twilight getting almost-raped by there fiancees dad and brother.hehe.
    kyla6772
    kyla6772
    Jan 27, 2010 22:02
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    ooooo
    kerrieamc
    kerrieamc
    Jan 19, 2010 15:50
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    wtf no she didnt and why do u keep commenting on books that i read and say ' this sucks' and stuff?!
    ElenaGilbert
    ElenaGilbert
    Jan 18, 2010 21:42
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    YOU totally copied twilight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    sluely222
    sluely222
    Jan 17, 2010 09:59
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    lmao when did she read about this stuff she has yet to have non exciting moment
    littledrummer
    littledrummer
    Jan 14, 2010 17:48
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    thats awesome i love it, lol curdle cave is from a series of unfortunate events.. still i would never of thought of it in a story :)

    kirsty14
    kirsty14
    Jan 02, 2010 16:25
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    ...
    he had a hot dog in his pocket...?
    XDXDXDXDXD
    EFFING HILARIOUS
    xXApocalyptica_FanXx
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    Jan 01, 2010 13:56
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    how did she figure so much about the vampires?
    how_YOU_Dooin_
    how_YOU_Dooin_
    Dec 28, 2009 16:13
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    uhhh....she does alot of things and notices alot without us knowing about it...it's different, but kinda frusterating!
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