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laurenS

Nov 08, 2009
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[PG-13] Parents Strongly Cautioned

Part 11 of 12
Hey guyss!! sorry for not uploading soon. School is killing me.

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Chapter 10:

The rest of the day continued without highlights. 99% of the guys had asked me out and I was so tired of keep rejecting all their invitations. Most of them couldn't get the meaning of the word NO because they followed me around school trying to convince me to go on a date with them. They looked like stalkers.

When I was staring to get really annoyed about them, school was over.

I got a text message from Brian.

Hther am outside ur skool. Call m :)

As soon as I finished reading his message, I got another one from him.

Its Brian by the wy

He was so cute, how could he ever think that I would forget who he was. I have been thinking about him all day long.

I went out of school. I looked around and noticed that there was a crowd around something, and people were whispering to each other. I started to get closer to the crowd when I noticed that they were all watching someone that was on a black motorcycle. It was awesome, and looked really expensive.

There was somebody on it. I could tell that he was a guy, because of his body. He was wearing a black leather jacket with yellow and red flames; he was also wearing a pair of black faded jeans and a pair of black motorcycle boots.

I couldn't see his face because he was wearing a black helmet. I turned around so I could go and look for Brian, I didn't want to keep him waiting.

I started walking to the main entrance when somebody shouted my name, I turned and the guy from the motorcycle was walking towards me. The entire crowd parted so he could come through.

How did this guy knew my name? I stared at him without answering, I think I have written - get away from me psycho - all over my face because he laughed and took off the helmet.

All the girls gasped and let their mouths hanging open when they saw him (I couldn't blame them, he was gorgeous). It was Brian of course, and let me tell you after noticing who he was, I looked at him, really looked, and noticed why all the girls were almost drooling over him.

HE LOOKED SUPER HOT! I mean his body on those tight jeans and the leather jacket, and the sexy smile that was only directed at me was too much. I think one of the girls fainted just at seeing all his sexiness standing a few inches from her. I couldn't breathe properly.

(Come on Heather, get a grip. Don't just stand there looking like the other girls that were ready to jump over him)

"Hey Brian" All the girls gasped again. They looked like they were watching a Tennis match. First they were looking at Brian, then at me, then at Brian, then at me again.

"Hey Heather, I thought you wouldn't recognize me" he said

"At first I didn't" I admitted

"I shouldn't have wear the Helmet, but you know safety is first"

"Yeah" I chuckled

"So... Do you want to get going?" he asked

"Yeah, sure" All the girls that were around me were throwing daggers at me for taking Brian away from them, and the boys seemed relieved that he wasn't staying that long.

The guys that haven't asked me out were eyeing me like I was their next conquest, even the ones that were older than me (Yeah right!)

Brian grabbed my hand to take me to his motorcycle. The girls where now killing me in their minds. We get to where his ride was.

"Uhmm... There is going to be a little problem" I said to Brian

"What?" He asked

"Well, am not the kind of girl who likes to show her panties to every person who has eyes"

"Oh, I haven't thought about that" He looked around like trying to find something to cover my short dress (Only Lucy thinks that is a good idea to wear a dress so I can go to school. Well she didn't know that I was going to be riding on a Motorcycle)

"Mmm... Oh I know!" said Brian more like a scream in joy for his idea. He took his Jacket off and gave it me so I could wear it. That was a big mistake. He was wearing a tight white t-shirt beneath the jacket, so now all the girls *cough* including me *cough* were now on the side of the luckiest girls on the world because we were now available to admire his toned arms and his six pack. Oh god!!

I couldn't help it, my mouth dropped at that moment. But you should have seen the other girls; they looked like their favorite dish was there. Their eyes were shining with desire (I hope I didn't look that way)
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cassie_16
Jan 05, 2010 18:05
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its 3:17 in the morning and im NOT going to go to sleep until i finish all the chapters.
please upload more quickly

debby13
Dec 28, 2009 19:17
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its 3:17 in the morning and im NOT going to go to sleep until i finish all the chapters.
pelase upload more quickly

debby13
Dec 28, 2009 19:17
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love it, keep writing :) so far im glued

CrystalClair
Dec 19, 2009 07:14
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i have started to read the story a while ago and the first chapter made me hooked to read the rest and you are really good! subscribed as a new fan! :) hope you upload soon!

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carrot
Dec 19, 2009 05:40
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Dec 19, 2009 00:28
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Dec 19, 2009 00:04
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