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Kishauna1
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Nov 03, 2009
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[PG-13] Parents Strongly Cautioned

Part 1 of 10
Chapter 1
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"Oh shit," I murmured after checking the clock. I was going to be late to the hell hole (school) first day back. I had just turned 17 and still going to to Lincolnh Academy. I was 5"7', I had long blonde hair that reached 3/4 down my back, big blue eyes and was curvy but hid it under baggy clothes also I wore glasses and always kept my hair down so it kind of covered my face.

I ran out of my room, down the stairs and an apple but looked at the time and remembered that the clock was new and an hour behing. Anyways I jumped into my car, drover to school, and parked. I just sat there til my one and only friend Lauren knocked on my car window. "Bri!!" She said enthusiastically. " What???" I said in a friendly yell way. I got out of my car and began walking up the steps when someone bumped into me. It was Damian Henderson A.K.A the school's hottest jerk. He was on the football team, he was very well built, had blonde hair, green eyes, pink (kissable) lips and was pretty tall. "Watch where you're going" he said as he began walking off. " Asshole" I mumbled making sure no one heard. Lauren leant me a hand and took me into school. We both had Mr. Trenchton for homeroom. We both walked in and realized Damian had the same homeroom as us. Mr. Trenchton gave me a seat right next to Damian. "Oh nooon why do I get a loner, I'd rather her friend lauren." Tears were coming to my eyes and everyone were laughing. Lauren left my side and sat next to Damian, I thought she was my friend. I ran out of the school and just kept running til I bumped into someone and fell on my butt. A woman turned around " whatch where yo....." "Omg let me help you up." She said with a tint of happiness in her voice " how would you like a deal for half a million dollars?" She said smiling. " I don't do porn, if that's what you are aiming for," I said and she laughed " no silly, I want you to be a model, please, please, please" she said putting on the cutest puppy dog face I had ever seen in my life. "Okay, I guess, but why would you want me to be a model." " Have you seen yourself, your gorgeous, all you need is a new style.

She made a few phone calls and a limo showed up and we both got in. Her name was Lisa Brighton and she worked for Instyle Magazine. I then went to get my make up, hair, and spa treatment and clothes fitting. It hurt like hell but whebi was all done I looked gorgeous, I didn't even recognize myself in the mirror. My clothes where tight fitting and showed a bit cleavage, my hair was shiny and wavy, I had contact which really bought out my eyes and I wanted to kiss myself. " Stop drooling, I left your makeupe, hair products, clothes, accesories, shoes , perfume and a small suprise for you in the limo, don't forget to take them on your way out. When I got home, my parents had gone out on a buisness trip and wouldn't be back for two weeks. They left me a gold card and a cellphone just in case anything happened.

I got out of bed and took a shower and got dressed in the stuff lisa picked out for me and put on my make-up. I had to admit I looked damn good. I got into my car and drove to school, parked and just sat there. Forgetting about the makeover I got out of the car. I was greeted with wide eyed guys and jealous girls. Lauren came up to me " h...." She started to say " fuck off," I said entering the school. I went to homeroom and Damian grabbed my butt. I turned around and slapped him " don't touch me asshole." Everyone started lauging and I went and took my seat. "Mr. Trenchton was taking attendance when he said " Bri Anderson" "Here I called out," and all eyes were one me. "Bri" Damian called out in a suprised voice. "No shit sherlock" I said with a smile making it's way to my face
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How was my first chapter, i don't think it was that bad was it,
If everything goes well my next chapter will be on by thursday.
[PG-13] Parents Strongly Cautioned

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ok its good but has a very fast pace and you arent really describing things or her emotions
littledrummer
littledrummer
Feb 23, 2010 18:24
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WOWWWWWWWOWWWWWWOWWWWWWW!

iTS REELY Greeat!
:)
Thel3arbieDoll
Thel3arbieDoll
Feb 12, 2010 11:48
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really good
but isnt this a shorter version of CHA_CHiNG_Bby s story Supermodel? last week i was just the school's geek with stuff added so only slight similaritys
shyasas
shyasas
Feb 06, 2010 14:25
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its good
Royalsft7
Royalsft7
Jan 12, 2010 11:42
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good story but u should put a little more description...but awsome story overall :)
sunnyrain94
sunnyrain94
Dec 18, 2009 19:03
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awesome you are an awesome writer.

except i think you could add just a little more detail to your stories.
love the story line

a bit cliche i need you to add an interesting twist to keep
reviewers reading.
<3

xoxo,
S
EndlessXenvy
EndlessXenvy
Dec 01, 2009 15:12
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i LIKED it soo much and its ONLYthe first page cant wait to read the rest *squeel*
sandysuger3
sandysuger3
Dec 01, 2009 08:27
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I really like how you didn't drone on over the makeover! You just went straight to everyones reactions!! Luv It! xoxo Meriah
luv2beme333
luv2beme333
Nov 16, 2009 09:20
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love it!!!!
twilightkk
twilightkk
Nov 04, 2009 15:07
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yeah thanks so much for reading. wooohooo (secret happy dancing)
Kishauna1
Kishauna1
Nov 03, 2009 15:02
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