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assasin

on Oct 29, 2009
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The hotel
I thought I needed a vacation so I checked into the démodé hotel. When I got my keys the clerk told me "do not look inside the door hole in room 630 it won't be worth it" she said. "Why?" I asked. "Well let's just say things get spooky in there" she said. Of course I looked in the door hole. On the first night I saw a woman standing on the balcony with a white dress on looking out to the city. The next day I looked again and all I could see was red. I went back downstairs and asked the clerk what the deal was with the room. "Well I guess I should tell you. The woman you saw had checked in 13 years ago but she wasn't alone she had a husband. The husband had worked for the army though and was on leave the day after they checked in. the woman stayed in the hotel for months but her husband never returned so she hung herself and we've never vacated the room since" she said. "What does she look like?" I asked. "Well she's a blond, very pale, short nose, and she has red eyes" she said.

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it's okay..i'm okay now that we cleared out our misunderstandings..

silencedMANN...
Nov 01, 2009 00:18
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@silencedMANNY thankyou because i am sorry as well i thought the comment ment that you did not like it since everyone already knows this infact i thought i was one of the very few to know this story

assasin
Oct 31, 2009 20:36
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i was supposed to tell about us having a peephole and am scared when i heard the story-but changed my mind..its really not supposed to be a bad comment..i really don't get why you thought of it as bad..i was just happy to read and recall the story, and did you know that this story is like a chain story..if you're scared by it you tell you're friends and so on..so i really don't know who the real story teller was..so sorry if you're upset, i am actually upset because you're upset..

sorry again..really i am..i should have said the peephole thing..or else this wouldn't happen..and like i said that was supposed to be a compliment-at least that's how i want it to be...i really can't say sorry enough so really i am sorry...my god, i already hurt a person here on wattpad..and we don't know each other and we already had upset each other...

i am sorry.

manny

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please tell why you're upset because i really don't why..

silencedMANN...
Oct 31, 2009 18:29
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@silencedMANNY if your going to put my story down dont comment if it wasnt supposed to be a bad comment then reply and tell me because this is upsetting

assasin
Oct 31, 2009 12:06
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a friend told me this story... and by the way it was the scariest for her!!!

silencedMANN...
Oct 31, 2009 04:13
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Cool!you're great at this stuff.Thanks for letting me know about this story,would've been so bummed out if I hadn't read this :)

jemsparkle
Oct 30, 2009 05:09
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now think about what he saw after reading this

assasin
Oct 29, 2009 19:35
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