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twilightkk

on Oct 26, 2009
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I tried to kill myself..A vampire saved me...I didn't want to be saved.
(Jezebel's pov)
After We got back,My walk-in closet was also filled with all the clothes I picked out.I was a little worried about how much money I was spending.But, apparently they had all the money in the world to spend so after I found that out I almost bought the whole mall.
I also laughed when they boy (I found out his name is Derek)helped me unpack it into my closet and found my unwear was lacy and thin and i also bought some ligrne too! His eyes almost popped out of his head with pleasure! He was actually a very nice and cool person to hang out with.He was 18 and I think he deffinetly likes me and I think I like him and I might have.....kissed him....with my tongue.
I didn't mean to!! I just really,really like him. But it got awkward after he........bit me. It was like a jellyfish sting then I could feel nothing but what he was thinking.
But, I came to my senses andsaw a memory of mike giveing me a hickey so I held him there he tried to pull away but, I held him tighter. He was groaning for me to let him stop.But soon I didn't have the stranght to hold him there.So I felt him weave out of my arms and say "I love you."I thought I might have dreamed this but,I had a feeling that he did say it.

(Derek's pov)
I said I loved her! What do I do??! Ok mabye she will think it was a dream.Yeah a dream that's what I will think too.Ohhhhh But,I know it wasn't.Ok I think she will be ok I ytook alot of blood though.I know why she did it.I saw her memory in my mind and it hurt her.More than she let's people know.





Ok ty people plz comment and support!!ty rate too!!:]

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yes plz more details

goodvampsrul...
Nov 13, 2009 19:45
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you writte to fast :( go slower and into detaiiillll.

nayaabx
Nov 10, 2009 13:31
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faster

jingkang101
Nov 01, 2009 13:52
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@beeEaSt Thank you i will slow down everyone i promise!!♥♥♥

twilightkk
Oct 26, 2009 21:45
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it's really really good story line, but you just started the story and it's already into the juicy stuff...which isn't bad, but just add some more openers to the story maybe.. but i think it's going somewhere good!:)

beeEaSt
Oct 26, 2009 21:38
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@SmileyEm IT's ok I will try to slow down.:]

twilightkk
Oct 26, 2009 20:36
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No offense but you Go way to fast in the story.

SmileyEm
Oct 26, 2009 20:30
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i love it! please post more really good!!!!!

Kiki_353
Oct 26, 2009 20:10
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sorry for typos!

twilightkk
Oct 26, 2009 20:06
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