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on Oct 23, 2009
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I wish... (Chapter 5)

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Vote and comment please. Sorry if there are mistakes I don't really check it or anything but I have fixed up mistakes that I could see in previous chapters.
Thanks, Elise
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He remembers me.

I sighed as I stared at the computer screen. I hadn't been myself lately and I'm not the only one who's noticed it. A few friends have asked if I was okay and others plain just looked at me as if they weren't sure what to do or say to me.

School and friends had become a faint memory, a blur. I was so caught up with thinking about him, thinking about the old times. But today I would stop thinking about him; I just need something to get my mind off him.

I packed my bag lazily and got ready for school. My parents take me to school so I waited for my dad to finish his coffee. I sat on the couch while I waited and flicked through the music channels till I found a song I liked. The music channels are probably my favourite channels since I know I will always find something I like.

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"ALICE, have you heard? There's a new guy, apparently he is absolutely gorgeous!"

I didn't realise that a huge smile had spread across my face. The girls giggled at me. This was it; this was the big thing that would keep my mind off Scott. Dreamy, strong yet gentle Scott. NO STOP IT! What is with me and that guy?

I couldn't help but keep a lookout for this new apparently gorgeous boy. The few people who had seen him talked about him as if he were a god and I have to say I couldn't wait to get a look at him. It wasn't just his looks they talked about, it was his voice, how kind he was but apparently he was a little quiet. I was jumpy all day; I was excited that maybe this guy would get my mind off him. Then I finally realised something, I could ask his name. Oh I bet his name was something dreamy!

"Kim! What is his name?"

"Hmmmm I think it was something with S, Steve, Steven, Sam, Sssssssssssssss, Scott? Scott, yeah that's it. Scott Wil - Ohmygod!"

I instantly froze as soon as she mentioned that name, I remembered the feeling I got the other day when we had last been together.

"Are you serious?"

"Um, do you want the truth?"

5% of me was disappointed, probably because this meant there was no way he was going to get off my mind if he was around most of the time and the other 95% was ecstatic. I think it may have showed too.

"I thought you wouldn't like that he is here?"

"Uh what are you talking about? Of course I don't like it!"

Kim just smirked at me.

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I was in the hallway grabbing a book I had left in my locker. I always seemed to forget a book; we were meant to do 10 minutes of reading at the start of class. I sighed as I poked through everything in my locker trying to find the book I had been reading. I heard footsteps but ignored them. Then I could feel a presence behind me, it was very close.

"Allie, you may think I don't remember you or us, the way we used to be but trust me. I remember you, you aren't easy to forget. I guess we will be seeing more of each other and I'm glad. I missed you and I'm never going to let you go again." He whispered into my ear.

I almost melted on the spot, I could feel his warm breath against my neck, his voice was so inviting. My heart was racing at a speed I didn't know possible; those soft electric currents were much stronger then last time, why did he say that to me! I felt myself blush a deep red.

I turned around as he walked away and stared at his figure, he was a lot more muscular then I remembered. As soon as I was sure he had left I let out the deep breath I had taken the second I realised it was him. I smiled as I realised he had just called me Allie. He would call me that as a kid; he was and is the only person to call me Allie. I think he knew that I loved being called Allie; I thought it was such a pretty name, much prettier then boring old Alice. I shook my head. I grabbed my book after taking a moment to calm down. I shut the locker, locked it then turned around.

"I felt like I was watching the start of a porno." Mark said chuckling.

I glared at him but gave up and couldn't suppress a small laugh. Mark was a good friend he was the dirtiest person I knew. He could make anything dirty I reckon. I shook my head at him and was about to walk off when I realised he had just seen that. I doubled back.

"Don't you dare tell ANYBODY about anything you just saw!" I said warningly.

He smirked but nodded. I smiled at him.

"Thank you!"

I walked back to class thinking about what had just happened. I felt like someone had just given me everything I could ever want. What he said just kept replaying in my mind over and over again like a beautiful broken record that I wanted to never stop. Later I got thinking though, what does this mean? What is going to happen?

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Gaahh Elise!! Scott = Dreaaaamy or what?!! LOL. Mark? Seriously? LOL how Mackenzie of him. Wonderful use of words. I love how you described some things like: "like a beautiful broken record" and "those soft electric currents" <-- well basically that whole paragraph. Well done Elise!! Truly exceeding me! WOOH! Can't wait for next chapt!

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