Become a fanWow great poem by telling a story!!
It's creepy and cute at the same time! haha
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Gnomes
By Dillon Collins
Asi sit in the lounge being bored,
i am peirced underneath by a sword.
By the gnomes in the couches that hide,
down there in the underside.
You see the gnomes have this world down below,
where they make these swords don't you know.
And then they creep up towards the sky,
and use them to peirce you in the thigh.
But if this revelation has you rankled,
just wait, then they grab your ankle.
By Dillon Collins
Asi sit in the lounge being bored,
i am peirced underneath by a sword.
By the gnomes in the couches that hide,
down there in the underside.
You see the gnomes have this world down below,
where they make these swords don't you know.
And then they creep up towards the sky,
and use them to peirce you in the thigh.
But if this revelation has you rankled,
just wait, then they grab your ankle.
Comments & Reviews ^tophehe...cute! though i always imagined gnomes to be a little cuddly..=P fiesty little things...if u get a hold of one, send it 2 me ...lol... this is a cute poem ...i <3 it !  mairacheeda Nov 09, 2009 04:43 reply spam ooo, great poem, it's different from teh other poetry, and i loved it..
the gnomes are cute lol I mean creepy and scary haha  alleycat Oct 23, 2009 10:45 reply spam oh no, oh my, ur starting say as i! but why? hey i think You MIGHT LIKE MY NEW POEM BIG AND BAD its dark and full of wonderment like u -:.=.=  nicolletteni... Oct 22, 2009 01:09 reply spam OMG I love it. It was so cute, but then I have always like gnomes (lol).
peace out  supernatural... Oct 20, 2009 17:14 reply spam |
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