This is a sample, from my new new new book, I wanted to see how people resonded to it, and whether I should continuing writing it.
This is the middle or so, a bit I like but haven't finished I'll post ASAP.
The story so far: after the death of a Politian, vampire and incubi that used to live in harmony have now turned against each other. It a dangerous time to live and for Faith its her origin that get her thrown into the middle of everything.

Life experience came, finally, I've grown so tried and pissed off with revision and exams that it felt good to get out of campus. Only I knew that teachers would be watching my every move.
We filed into the gym, and our homeroom teachers organized us into our classes. Once the rolled was called out a silence fell over the gym. Filled with excitement, tension and a lot of lust, it didn't surprise me by how many boys I was sitting around. The testosterone was choking me, but at the same time, made me calm, and ready. I starting to sense a craving for it, life experience should be easy.
"Alright" said Aidan, he voice rang clear through the gym "This is how life experience is going to work" Why did he have to look so hot tonight? If I wasn't getting turned on by the testosterone in the air than looking at him would have done it. His hair was in its perfect messy state, as it hung over his icy blue eyes and his charcoal gray sweater clung to his body perfectly out lining the contours of his abs. I expanded my sense and found his after save, I melted, it spoke of him. It was him. He didn't smell like it, it smelled like him. "You will go with your homerooms," His dreamy, velvet like voice flowed through the air and bought me out of my illegal day dreams.
I had to be serious, this was serious, I couldn't get hung up on him and fail my life experience. Not that it had much use to me, I knew perfectly well what to do, and everybody here did. This was just a good excuse to hit some night clubs with my friends.
"You will go out to some night clubs- but remember, this you life experience and you have to show us that you know what you are doing. For the future of our race I speal for the entire faculty when I say 'Don't fuck this up!'" swear words that came out his mouth even sounded more sexy then they should. Then I realized that I was more hung up on him then I should be. Ever. It was his testosterone, he was letting it out all over the place- thought he knew it. Quickly I pulled mine back and cut myself off from everyone's around me.
Tonight will be long.
After he explained everything else I caught up with Kitty on the way back to the dorms.
Kitty was the rest of the succubi and incubi, tall, thin, and extremely attractive. The height that she had on me was coveted by her long legs. Thin with a slight tan, her hair ran just past her shoulder in bountiful golden curls, that made her green eyes brighter. Kitty was known by the student body as French Kitty, no by the brand, but she had a reputation for having french kissed half the male student population.
"Life experience is so useless" she moaned as well walked up the stairs. "I mean, we are taught all of this stuff, we know how to do it, then they make us show them that we can. Its an easy 'A' for us, and free porn for them"
I rolled my eyes "You know that it's not going to be exactly like that"
She shrugged "Whatever" she pushed open the door to her dorm and walked inside "At least we'll get to go out of this place" she closed the door, and I continued on to my dorm.
Being on a nocturnal schedule, it was morning here, so younger student were getting ready for school, or making their way down for breakfast. Morning here meant early night for humans, there'd be no breakfast for me- unless I lure someone.
I returned to my room and got ready, they didn't give enough time to allow showers, but it was enough to make myself presentable.
There was no dress code for today, seeing as we were going into clubs; we really had to fit the profile.
I straightened out the kinks in my hair, and pulled on my dress. It was sequined black, low-cut, and so short that it should be illegal- if I pulled it up but bum would show, but if I pulled it down my tits would hang out. I applied enough mascara to my eyes, to make them standout without making me look cheap.
Kitty appeared in my door when I was pulling on my heels- so tall they added another foot to my height, I was almost as tall as her now.
"Hey, are you ready we have to go. Now" she pulled me out off my bed, and I got my first goo look at her, she was dressed for the clubbing scene too. Short, strapless dress, in her trademark shade of pink, her hair weren't in their usual curls- instead straightened out perfectly.