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I need critisism on this
It was half done by my cousin Savannah and finished by me

but I need to have cunstructive critisism

and any idea for a title would be nice ^_^;

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All you do is push and pull

You don't tell the truth,

you don't have a soul

Take off the mask

It doesn't hide who you are anymore

I'm not doing this again

You won't break me

I'm not yours

I've got one foot out the door

I'm not going home,

But I ain't coming back

Here's a little secret for you,

I'm not changing for you anymore

You can whisper fake little promises

and yell till' I shake

You can get in my head and mess with things

but I'm never gonna break

You won't break me

I'm not yours

I've got one foot out the door

I'm not going home,

But I ain't coming back

Here's a little secret for you,

I'm not changing for you anymore

I'll tell you just one last time

I'm not doing this again

I know your secrets

I've found out your lies

We are ending this now

What more is there to say?

I've been hurt

I've been pissed

Sorry but the few smiles inbetween will not save you

I'm not yours

so stop trying to get me to stay

I'm leaving

I will not do this again

You won't break me

I'm not yours

I've got one foot out the door

I'm not going home,

But I ain't coming back

Here's a little secret for you,

I'm not changing for you anymore