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Oct 12, 2009
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Prying Eyes

No one seems to unhook
These darting blades I took
From the way they judge my look,
So I just weep at my secret nook.

No one seems to know
All these insecurities I swallow,
And for me to last tomorrow,
I have to wear this mask of Zorro.

No one seems to care
As I walk down the trail, each time I prepare
From those piercing eyes that stare.
So I hide behind my hair, as always, feeling bare.

No one seems to feel
These dreadful emotions I conceal.
This might be a nightmare, an ordeal.
Please wake me up, make this life unreal.

No one seems to dry
These silent tears I cry,
With this poem, I can only try
To block those eyes that pry.

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i luv it
trinity13
trinity13
Dec 21, 2009 16:25
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agreed with the rest... i liked it alot.

great job..=D
MiaCat
MiaCat
Nov 28, 2009 03:30
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I love it.
Sometimes this feeling comes to me, that everyone looks or stares at me. but they don't actually see me. You're really great! I love ur poems! And i agree with biggabit about the our own little worlds...
Keep up the gud work!
dark-angel
dark-angel
Oct 30, 2009 06:17
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I think that the poems ideas are great but the extent of the rhyming makes it difficult to read.
simpman4
simpman4
Oct 25, 2009 22:26
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Brilliant poem !

So true that no one seems to see...

Trouble is we're all wrapped up in our own little worlds...

Well written x
biggabit
biggabit
Oct 20, 2009 07:17
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aww zorro that funny and smarter in its own way
nicollettenikki
nicollettenikki
Oct 13, 2009 01:31
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