WATT Reviews

Title: Abscond




Author: rain-kissed_midnight




Current Number of Chapters: 12




Current Number of Reads: 2,127 (undiscovered)




Chapter Reviewed: One




Reviewed by eternaldestiny





Summary: Many years into the future, technology has advanced ~ many new items developing, a better life for people all over the world....but with more life, there is more crime. Scientists have unleashed the ultimate solution and have launched the LEECHES project ~ the Leave Everything, Eradicating Crimes in Hell; Effectively Simple Organization. The organization has created a different dimension , where those who have attempted suicide or did unforgivable crimes would repent in a dark and deadly place. Abscond, the magical~like hell has boys between the ages of ten and twenty, and they are repenting for their sins. But when a sixteen year old girl is put into this Abscond, without any memories and others are causing belief that she signals the end of Abscond. Is that favorable or unfavorable to those in the dimension? And what exactly is going on when the living conditions get worse and worse as more girls come to Abscond?




Summary of Chapter: Lassie wakes up in the Abscond without remembring anything about herself.




Review: This story contained a lot of great details. The sentence structure flowed really nicely and there was not too many description to make me bored. I could easily imagine the situation and the setting. However, this story reminded me a lot of The Maze Runner and The Scorch Trials. Guy or girl wakes up in a strange place filled with the opposite gender without remembering who they are or any of their history. This author may have to add some of her own twists if she does not want to sound too much like The Maze Runner. But if you have not read that book yet, this is a very intriguing story. My only other problem with this story is that the author writes with too many 'I's. It got tiresome after a while.




Rating:


7.5 out of 10