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[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested

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Predator

A body shuddering in the darkness of night, a hand reaching over to turn on the light. But the light is gone and instead there's a face, a face that's bloody with the flesh that it takes.

With the flesh that it takes from the children that lie, in their bags by the fire, under the sky.

But there's one child here who's not ready to die, so he grabbed the axe by the woodpile with a look rather sly.

So he hides in the woods by the fire in the glen, being scared by the noises in the night now and then. But he remains strong in his duty to man, to destroy the predator as fast as he can.

So now the predators coming and the blood isn't congealed, it's running.

The boy comes with the axe, the beast snarls and attacks, oh who will win the battle this dreadful day?

The boy makes the fatal swing; the beast shocks you with its scream, oh who would dare to dream it would end this way?

Now a new day has awoken, the werewolf's back is broken, and your friends are waking up around the fire.
Even though the werewolf's back is broken, you're not very outspoken, your friends will never here about your night. The daytime has awoken, the battle goes unspoken, and somehow it seems right that they don't know.

For you the joy is greater, maybe you'll tell them later, but likely not when thinking of your soul.
[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested

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@legnababes thanks!(:
Lampshade37
Lampshade37
Jan 13, 2010 14:55
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AMAZING!!!

legnababes
legnababes
Jan 13, 2010 14:32
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AMAIZING!!!
legnababes
legnababes
Jan 13, 2010 14:30
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@Davesgurl hey thank you(: for putting in te time to read and comment.(:
Lampshade37
Lampshade37
Jan 13, 2010 14:26
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its good just that un spoken and out spoken are kind of forced but in good context, good context
vamps_rock1
vamps_rock1
Oct 16, 2009 17:02
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ah... i simply love poems that are telling something like a story! and this one was a marvellous thing to read! thanks for posting
alleycat
alleycat
Oct 13, 2009 07:02
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AMAZING!!!!!
supernaturalmom
supernaturalmom
Oct 10, 2009 12:27
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ha ha that was dark and cool and cute all at the same time and it felt like you were telling me a story awesomeness
nicollettenikki
nicollettenikki
Oct 10, 2009 11:53
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