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on Oct 08, 2009
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Ally's P.O.V

He pushed me away and got up. He covered his nose that was gushing with blood with his hand and quickly walked down the hall to the bathroom.

Ohhh that's it im going to give it to Nate!

"What the hell was all that about?!" i yelled at him over the loud music.

"uh nuthin never mind" Nate said his feet shifting uneasily and his eyes darting around the room avoiding eye contact. He always sucked at keeping things from me.

"That was hardly nothing you punched your brother in the face!!" i couldn't believe this, i didn't want me to be the reason for all this mess.

"He just said something that provoked me" Nate said looking down, ashamed of himself.

"Aww Nate come on! You have to control your temper!! Remember what happened with Ryan" he had been the love of my life or so i thought, long story short he broke my heart and Nate almost killed him. . . literally.

"I still can't believe you forgave him for that" his face had turned up in disgust.

"Hey who ever said i forgave him?! No way am i going to forget what he did to me!" just thinking about it still hurt. No don't think about it, forget him he is in the past this is the present, move on.

"Okay look Nate, I'm kind of guessing that you have feelings for me, and i mean in a more than a friend way, am i right?" i just had to come right out and say it to solve further confusion.

"Yeh kind of" he said looking down again embarrassed.

"And is the whole me and Chase seven minutes in heaven the reason you punched him?" i was pretty sure that it was but i just wanted to hear it from him.

"Yes, yes it is Ally" he said looking me determinedly in the eye.

"The thought of you being with someone else, someone else making you laugh when your sad, someone else wiping away your tears when your upset and especially the thought of my brother making out with you in a closet even if it was just for a game drives me insane!! You don't have the faintest idea of the pull you have on me, it's like every minute we were apart it felt like a piece of me was gone, an empty hole just eating away at my chest growing bigger and bigger waiting to consume me whole the longer we were apart. Then just as i thought that it was starting to heal dad brings me back here and i see you again and I'm right where i started, completely, hopelessly in love with you" he finished sighing his eyes pouring his soul willingly into mine.

"Y. .you love m. . . .me?" he loves me? What the! How can he love me!

"Yes Ally ever since you started dating Ryan i knew that i felt something for you because every time i saw you two together i would be so angry, seeing him make you laugh and smile made me so jealous! i wanted to be the one to make you smile and laugh, not Ryan, not any other guy! I want to be the one for you!" he paused and repeated slowly and softly caressing my cheek with his hand "I love you."

A/N how did you like the last part?? i wasnt sure how to write what Nate was feeling so i hope i got it right! i know that i said i would put it at the end of the last one but then i thought that it would b easier if i just did a new one. plz comment and vote you guys rock!!! i cant believe that i was on the second page of the wats hot list!!! thank u sooooooo much!!! XD i love you all!!! (lolz i feel like a rockstar at the end of their concert lolz XP) x x x <3

p.s. sorry i havent writtin for so long it was cause i was on a holiday!!! XD i know thats no excuse but plz forgive me *puppy dog face* :)

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*squels* OMGOSH! !!

nekoxion9
Nov 15, 2009 18:56
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*squels* OMGOSH! !!

nekoxion9
Nov 15, 2009 18:56
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i like chase moooooore :D i want him :P

cassie3
Nov 15, 2009 12:39
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awwwww...sooo romantic...*swoon*

meenaanika
Oct 26, 2009 05:14
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write moreee pleaseeee.

i like chasee ;)

devinalela
Oct 25, 2009 17:51
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awwww:]
team .... idk yet lloll
but nate's adoranlee

oreofacexo
Oct 15, 2009 13:54
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OMG! But i think I'm now Tema Chase srry but Chase is just better not so obsessive

Vampalicous
Oct 15, 2009 12:11
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omg uve got to write more!!!!!!

jeviga823
Oct 13, 2009 22:59
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please continue!! ^_^

hannah009
Oct 13, 2009 06:08
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love it! but i must say that i am team chase :D

marissalynn
Oct 12, 2009 21:40
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