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on Oct 06, 2009
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Lost: part 1

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CHAPTER 1:

(Leyna's POV)

Light smooth fingers trailed along my back, sending shivers through me. I felt the warm tingling sensation of his breath on my stomach where he rested his head. The warmth was emanating to and from me. My heart was about to burst with every beat slowly pounding away from all the love and cared surrounds me from him. Oh how precious his name is on my tongue that I feel if I say it too much he will disappear himself, wearing him out too much.
I lay with my bright blond curls splayed out to catch the sun's rays. The feel of soft hot sand moves with my every breath. Some drips through my fingers as I slowly pick some up, letting it fall from my open palm. A light breeze passes over me, and I shiver. He cuddles closer to me, a tiny moan escaping his lips. My other hand is playing with his soft black hair that curled around my fingers, each strand so delicate to me. The light brush of kisses trailing up my stomach makes the caged butterflies in my belly tumble out, as I tremble under his touch. He reaches right below my chest he lifts himself up and slides his body against mine until his lips are even with mine. He teases me as he brushes his lips from my jaw to my ear and back, he does this under my lower lip is trembling. He chuckles and nipples on my neck and my breathing hikes as his full lush lips are raised above mine and lightly press against my own, my inside bursting as his all his being is dripping into the kiss, turning fierce and passionate. I'm the first to break away panting, when I hear his breathing being barely hitched is scares me that he didn't feel the kiss like I do, but when his warm blue eyes look my way sending an immense amount of love I calm myself. He lays his head back down on me, except he rests on my chest, listening to the sound of my heart rate. When he hears it pounding away he smiles softly. I let out a shaky laugh when he starts to play with the strings on my bathing suit, tickling my warm skin.
When he looks up at me there is a grin sneaking up on his lips, making me suspicious. All of a sudden he is up, throwing my over his shoulders and running to the ice cold water, I try climbing up on him, the higher the water splashes, he throws me when it's up to his waist. I drop into the water and scramble over to him screeching and laughing as he picks me up and twirls. I grab his face and smash my lips onto his, I hear a few kids screech and complain about us, but I don't take notice. I don't take notice in anything, so when I hear screams of terror instead of complaints, it is too late. When I slip from my loves grasp he has shock written all over his face, and I hear a choked off scream coming from someone. When I realizes it's Him I try and comfort him, but pain slices through every being of my body, as I'm racked with screams my struggles, it's all cut off when I'm dragged under. I kick and fight and try and scream, choking. How did I not realize I was being attacked the moment it happened? As if I wasn't inhabiting my body before this happened. My body was giving way, and shutting down. I was so dizzy.
In the distance I could hear shouts and screams as my attacker let go for some reason. I heard sobbing right next to my head, but it seemed so far away. Oh so far. What broke me from the deep darkness I felt like I was floating in was him, the voice was broken and cracked as he said, "Oh Leyna, my love don't die, please don't, I love you, you are suppose to be with me!" the sobs I realized were racking through him as he swam my body into the swarm of people. But I couldn't seem to see anything. I was being pushed back under and hard, but I managed to slip out the words that hurt me just to think. "Goodbye my love, my Malachi," I whispered, my voice low and rasp. Then the screams turned to murmurs, then to a bubbling noise, that tickled my ears. Then all went silent and I felt as if I lost all my senses. That is all I remember, and now I'm stuck on replay in this sick masochistic dream, but that is all that's keeping me hanging on. Just where am I hanging on to?


~okay i know this is short, but i want comments and votes, and please feel free to express your feelings and take on what you think of my story, this is only like the begining and what Leyna is seeing again and again, like a never ending movie on repeat that you can't escape, and sorry this is long, but yeah... thnx :)~
xxxKeLs0xxx

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holy shizzz. amazing. amaaazzzing. more plzzz

laughcrylove...
Nov 20, 2009 22:14
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this is real good...xoxo...write more

KerryBerry16
Oct 25, 2009 05:49
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oh and the names have like meanings and yeah, that's why they are odd and it took me forever to find them, because i just got the vibe that i like the names too :D

starsabovexo...
Oct 06, 2009 21:31
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