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I'm hanging up the phone
The lines going cold
Cuz you're not speaking
You're off in your won world
Where I'm not just
A phone call away
This is how it stays
You might as well
Make your own way
Without me
Can't you see
The world we built together
Falling apart, now and forever
I'm not trying to build it
Back up now
All this time
Passes by
Still no reasons why
You shouldn't say goodbye
The lines going cold
Cuz you're not speaking
You're off in your won world
Where I'm not just
A phone call away
This is how it stays
You might as well
Make your own way
Without me
Can't you see
The world we built together
Falling apart, now and forever
I'm not trying to build it
Back up now
All this time
Passes by
Still no reasons why
You shouldn't say goodbye
Comments & Reviews ^top@kitty1325 I will read your stories. :D As for my poems, I usually write them due to raw emotions that I have at the time. They do come off the top of my head during that time tho. So I guess it's both.
Have a nice day. <3 ~:Undescribable:~ ~:Faith:~ <3 xo  Undescribabl... Oct 18, 2009 12:59 reply spam Well, thank you for that message, it was sweet and im glad that you would like my opinion. I think that you're poems are really good and you should continue to write. Check out my stories????? Does this poem have a story behind it, or do you write off the top of you're head.... just curious?????  kitty1325 Oct 14, 2009 20:12 reply spam heartfire: I really do too. :D I don't know why but out of the three I've posted the most recent this is my favorite. :D Undescribabl... Oct 03, 2009 20:03 reply spam rtql8_en: Thanks. :D Sorry about the spelling error.
Rebeca: I'm happy that you leave short comments then. Cuz I like leaving people speechless. :D Damonh: Thanks for feeling that way. :D :D It means a lot to me. <3 ~:Undescribable:~ ~:Faith:~ <3 xo Undescribabl... Oct 03, 2009 13:03 reply spam This is very nice.i loved it.(my comments are short coz u always make me speechless lol)  Rebeca Oct 03, 2009 02:28 reply spam |
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