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on Oct 02, 2009
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The Line Is Going Cold

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I'm hanging up the phone
The lines going cold
Cuz you're not speaking
You're off in your won world
Where I'm not just
A phone call away

This is how it stays
You might as well
Make your own way
Without me

Can't you see
The world we built together
Falling apart, now and forever
I'm not trying to build it
Back up now

All this time
Passes by
Still no reasons why
You shouldn't say goodbye

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@kitty1325 I will read your stories. :D As for my poems, I usually write them due to raw emotions that I have at the time. They do come off the top of my head during that time tho. So I guess it's both.

Have a nice day.

<3 ~:Undescribable:~ ~:Faith:~ <3 xo

Undescribabl...
Oct 18, 2009 12:59
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Well, thank you for that message, it was sweet and im glad that you would like my opinion. I think that you're poems are really good and you should continue to write. Check out my stories????? Does this poem have a story behind it, or do you write off the top of you're head.... just curious?????

kitty1325
Oct 14, 2009 20:12
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heartfire: I really do too. :D I don't know why but out of the three I've posted the most recent this is my favorite. :D

Undescribabl...
Oct 03, 2009 20:03
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i love this poem soooo much.

heartfire
Oct 03, 2009 14:11
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rtql8_en: Thanks. :D Sorry about the spelling error.

Rebeca: I'm happy that you leave short comments then. Cuz I like leaving people speechless. :D

Damonh: Thanks for feeling that way. :D :D It means a lot to me.

<3 ~:Undescribable:~ ~:Faith:~ <3 xo

Undescribabl...
Oct 03, 2009 13:03
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^_^
(i wish i could vote twice)

Damonh
Oct 03, 2009 04:52
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This is very nice.i loved it.(my comments are short coz u always make me speechless lol)

Rebeca
Oct 03, 2009 02:28
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hey, you have some spell error there, instead of writing 'own', you wrote 'won'..

other than that, it's really good..

rtql8_en
Oct 02, 2009 21:00
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