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[PG-13] Parents Strongly Cautioned
Running away, kidnapped, and given to this year's biggest asshole prince, anything else you're not telling me? Chapter one
I was in my bedroom, sitting in the corner, hugging my knees. I kept rocking backwards and forwards, trying to comfort myself. I had no one; I knew my Father would be home soon. The beatings would come; I should run away, right now.
I didn't have the courage to; I was weak and hurt, emotionally and physically. My 'father' he played games with my mind, trying to make me think I was crazy. I knew I wasn't but sometimes, I would let his sick games over-whelm me. Poisoning my mind, deluding it with fake thoughts of his memories.
I knew then, I should run, for I had a feeling tonight would be the last night I see the light again. I stood up slowly and grabbed my backpack; I shoved clothes, my purse which had about £1000.00 in it. Also I put some shoes and a brush in.
I put my black hoodie on, and raced out of my bedroom. I ran into the kitchen, putting two bottles of water and hundreds of chocolate bars into the backpack, I ran towards the door, and ran out of the door, not bothering to close it behind me.
I ran as fast as my legs would carry me, I ran into a forest, I didn't know where I was going, but I couldn't care less. I ran my eye's looking down, until I bumped into something, landing with a thud on the ground.
I looked up bewildered at a boy, around about 18 or 19 which was my age. He looked down at me, and smiled, "now now, what have we got here, hmm...you certainly are a beauty, what a wonderful present you'll make for the prince! Oh the joy!" he said in a low husky voice.
Wait what? Me a present, I don't think so. "Who the fuck are you?" I spat at the boy, getting up. "Oh me? Well I'm just the vampire prince's best friend taking you away, now my dear I'm sorry but this may hurt" he said to me. "W-wha..." I didn't get to finish because I was knocked around the head with a heavy object.
Darkness over-whelmed me, and I fell into it without putting up a fight.
I was in my bedroom, sitting in the corner, hugging my knees. I kept rocking backwards and forwards, trying to comfort myself. I had no one; I knew my Father would be home soon. The beatings would come; I should run away, right now.
I didn't have the courage to; I was weak and hurt, emotionally and physically. My 'father' he played games with my mind, trying to make me think I was crazy. I knew I wasn't but sometimes, I would let his sick games over-whelm me. Poisoning my mind, deluding it with fake thoughts of his memories.
I knew then, I should run, for I had a feeling tonight would be the last night I see the light again. I stood up slowly and grabbed my backpack; I shoved clothes, my purse which had about £1000.00 in it. Also I put some shoes and a brush in.
I put my black hoodie on, and raced out of my bedroom. I ran into the kitchen, putting two bottles of water and hundreds of chocolate bars into the backpack, I ran towards the door, and ran out of the door, not bothering to close it behind me.
I ran as fast as my legs would carry me, I ran into a forest, I didn't know where I was going, but I couldn't care less. I ran my eye's looking down, until I bumped into something, landing with a thud on the ground.
I looked up bewildered at a boy, around about 18 or 19 which was my age. He looked down at me, and smiled, "now now, what have we got here, hmm...you certainly are a beauty, what a wonderful present you'll make for the prince! Oh the joy!" he said in a low husky voice.
Wait what? Me a present, I don't think so. "Who the fuck are you?" I spat at the boy, getting up. "Oh me? Well I'm just the vampire prince's best friend taking you away, now my dear I'm sorry but this may hurt" he said to me. "W-wha..." I didn't get to finish because I was knocked around the head with a heavy object.
Darkness over-whelmed me, and I fell into it without putting up a fight.
[PG-13] Parents Strongly Cautioned
Comments & Reviews ^topoh i think its a great beginnig!!! Because now, you have to read the rest of the story to find out why her dad beats her and who the prince is and stuff...
Really good! I am going to become a fan! =p :D  Ara_Keeky_Ally Feb 16, 2010 12:34 reply spam a bit short dont you think!!! great all the same though!!!  twisted-for-scr... Jan 31, 2010 04:07 reply spam I agree pull the reins in a lil. all in all though a good book  Renesme102 Jan 30, 2010 12:32 reply spam I really like it, but it's goin a lil fast. you should describe where she lives and why she's scarred of her father and how scarred she is and what the woods look like at night! Love ya!  bookworm28 Jan 30, 2010 08:57 reply spam i dont agree with tiger123 either. its probaly one of the best begginings ive read. and trust me im a big reader. its a cliff hanger to have you wondering whats going to happen next and also have you screaming wtf just happened! haha. very good job. :)  kyla6772 Jan 27, 2010 20:14 reply spam i dont agree with tiger123 in anyway i think its perfect in every way.  ElenaGilbert Jan 26, 2010 02:43 reply spam i agree with tiger123 i rally like the idea and i love your writing in other books. its just i think THIS needs re-written. why would you carry £1000 in your purse?  ChloeLx Jan 25, 2010 13:04 reply spam I kind of agree with tiger123 but I think thats because its going to fast.  Xxbubblyxbubble... Jan 19, 2010 11:14 reply spam show all comments (63) |
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