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maddy9876

on Sep 30, 2009
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Hello everyone, still looking for a new name for the story.
Want to be in the story, just tell me your name and what you look like.
Keep commenting, messaging and voting.
Happy Reading.
-Maddison xxxx






Jamie held up his hands in a peaceful gesture,
"Would you mind taking a stroll with me, I need to talk to you. Don't worry; I am probably one of the safest people you can be with." He said.
Something about this guy was extremely familiar, but I couldn't put my finger on it, not yet anyways.
So I nodded, smiled and started walking next to him, we were heading back towards the school but lingering around trees, to make the walk longer.
For a long time we didn't speak, we walked in silence, but it was a comfortable silence, he was the first to break it.
"I am your brother Hazel, but please don't freak out and think I am insane, I really am and I have being trying to decide how to tell you for a long time now, and I thought just telling you straight out would be easier." He said pull of sympathy and hope.
I would have been ecstatic but; where was he when mom and I were getting beat up or raped? Where was he when I got picked on at school? Where was he when Joe ruined my birthday party and threatened all of my friends with a shotgun? Where was he when I cried every night? Where was he when mom died!?
I started crying and he came toward me slowly,
"Haz..." I interrupted him, I was furious and sad and every bad emotion you could think of.
"Don't, Don't you dare, Where were you my whole life when I needed you the most, when mom died, or when Joe raped me several times?" I screamed, I grasped my stomach and sat down on a rock, not caring if people at the school could see me or hear me.
He flinched at my words and I looked up to see her was crying silently.
"I am sorry, I will come for you soon and explain everything, and I am so so sorry Hazel." He chocked out in a cry and he ran, impossibly fast off into the woods, I just sat there and cried.

I woke up on the ground next to the rock and heard people shouting my name, but I didn't want them to find me, I just wanted to be numb, not feel anything, not miss a brother I didn't even know I had, or love a guy I had only met twice, it really annoyed and frustrated the hell out of me.
I attempted to stand up but fell back down, expecting to find the mossy ground but instead I felt a sharp stab in my head, my vision went all fuzzy but I looked to my left and say that I had hit my head on the rock, I let my hand shakily travel up my body until it reached my head and felt a lot of blood, my vision went black and I feel into a pressure filled darkness.

I awoke in a white room underneath uncomfortable bed covers, which were also white. Was I in heaven? No I wasn't because the bed covers wouldn't be this uncomfortable.
I opened my eyes groggily, and I noticed a stack of people standing around, looking at me worriedly, all I could hear was breathing, I am guessing they noticed my eyes open I mean they all have super hearing -I am guessing-.
Once my eyes had cleared and I could see clearly I saw, Jace, Mike, Cane, Seth, Trent, Kyle, Skyler, Lacey, Jamie, -what the hell- a teacher and a doctor.
"Ow" I said and smiled, I reached up to my head and flinched once I had touched it.
Then everyone started talking at once, arguing, great this should be joyful.

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umm you now how u were looking for a name well i love my friends name its kota she has blue purple eyes and jet black hair and eletric blue and toxic geen streaks in her hair i hope u use it she is really cool

OMGSMILE
Oct 27, 2009 16:35
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oi, I like this story can I be in it but the thing is I don't like my name so here's to vamp names I like (Alex or K) Tell me if u like them.

Mexicanem0
Oct 13, 2009 04:54
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uuuuhhh gret twist with the bro!!

paige569
Oct 12, 2009 06:06
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OMGGGGGGGGGG I LOVE THIS! I LOVE THIS! I LOVE THIS! I LOVEEEEEEEE THIS!!! :D :D :D :D Please please please update soon!
Skyler = Intimidating <3
Jace=Aww<3
Jamie= Kinda Sweet [=
Lacey=Wicked :P
All the other main peoplez = Awesomeee!

I'm not sure who i like out of Skyler and Jace. Grr.

Wonder how everyone is gunna react when they all talk nd stuff :P :P Omg i love this ^_^

Vampireeeee
Oct 08, 2009 02:40
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OOOOOO...OOOOOO MORE MORE!

BookLover23
Oct 05, 2009 19:09
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Cant wait to find out where the brother has been this whole time...this story just gets better and better

Doree08
Oct 01, 2009 10:32
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brother hmmm? where was he all her life?
more please.

sondra
Oct 01, 2009 08:36
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need more lmao thanks for the read

MissTJ
Oct 01, 2009 03:33
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WOW... Can't wait for more!!! =))

Jessiee
Oct 01, 2009 02:30
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<3<3<3 MORE!
WTF! JAMIE! ....need more.

thefallof_la...
Oct 01, 2009 00:04
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