omg...ur an intense writer & i like dat. keep it up. imma finish the rest now. just got done wit pg 1. lolz
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This is my story Dreams To Fulfill- please VOTE & COMMENT on y'all feedback!
OVERVIEW A story of hope, determination and tragedy; Dreams To Fulfill showcases the pressures and obstacles which 90% of teens go through today. It's a story about trying to overcome obstacles to fulfill our most precious dreams. The message of the story will mean you become emotionally involved as many readers will be able to relate to this, in terms of the drama which they have too overcome in their life in the fight against where they are and where they want to be. This isn't your typical fairytale story its a lot deeper than that it confronts issues which are going on in the real world, issues which are being ignored or misunderstood. Three words to sum up what you'll get from reading this? ENJOYMENT, HEARTBREAK, CLOSURE Dreams To Fulfill "YOOO FEDZZZZ- RUNNN". I ran as fast as I could without looking back. The eerie sound of police dogs barking sent a shivering rush down my spine as i hoped they wouldn't catch up with me. As I was running all I could think about was my future. I realized I was tired of this entire beef ting and just wanted out. The blue flashing light of police cars took over my vision so without thinking I slumped into a nearby bush hoping they would go past me; luckily they did. By this point it was 11pm so I picked up my blackberry and nervously dialed my girl Jasmine. Jasmine was bum from head to toe and was of mixed race heritage: Venezuelan and Jamaican she had a long silky curly weave and every man was on her. She was the only thing in my life that could put a smile on my face. The phone rang three times before she finally answered "Tremaine, I was just about to phone you" she said in an anxious voice, whilst breathing heavily down the phone". Had she been hurt I wondered "What's wrong b?" I replied urgently wanting to know what the problem was. "I don't know how to tell you this but... I'm 12weeks pregnant" she said before releasing a scared cry down the line. My body was taken over by a state of shock, how could she be pregnant? we were always so careful. Lost for words, I disconnected the call and decided to reach out for a spiff which I had rolled earlier and blaze it on the way home. It was now 11.25pm and I had reached into town. I decided to jump on the 79 as the roads were to bait. "Yo blud" as i turned around to see who's voice was calling me i noticed Terror running down the road towards me. However still shocked by Jasmines pregnancy I just walked onto the bus in the hope it would drive of before he got to me. As the bus pulled of I hung my head down low to give him the impression i hadn't seen him. Terror was 18yrs old and as dark as a shadow, he had been thrown out of school at 14 and used the streets to gain his rep. I slowly slouched down into my seat in the hope I could make sense of all the drama that had happened tonight. However, a familiar voice kept distracting me so I turned around to see who it was; only to find out it was Aaron with his two bredrins. Aaron was mixed race from Newtown we were be tight back in the day but fell out as he thought I was linking his girl Raisha. "Arrr this bus is full of waste nowadays" he shouted. I knew he was on about me but wasn't in the mood to start beef. "People go on prang when their on their ones man". I could feel my anger rushing up inside but somehow decided not to show him he was getting to me. Moments later I felt something sharply hit of the back of my head. It was a piece of paper they had shot at me threw a McDonald's straw. "you know what Aaron, your a fucking waste man" I said angrily. "Who are you calling a waste man" replied his bredrin. "Was I talking to you?" I sharply hit back. As the drama began to escalate I could see Aaron pulling out a long blade however, I knew he wouldn't use one on me. "Blud get of the bus before you get shanked" Aaron yelled, trying to impress his friends even though he knew it was my stop. Courageously I chose not to reply and walked of the bus listening to the laughter's of Aaron and his crew. After a slow walk home i had finally got to my front door where as soon as I stepped in my mom started cussing me about my rent. Not in the mood, i told her to shut her mouth and went upstairs straight to bed, which was the only place I was happy; it was the only place which took me to the world I wanted and the dreams I wanted to fulfill.
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