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Chapter 12
Love does not always win...

Denny's POV

I moaned frustrated glaring at the shackles on my feet and wrists.
"they're not there." A small voice said. I raised my eyes startled. I was sure there was no one in that room except for me. I've been staring in this emptiness for already what seemed like an eternity.
And again there was actually no one, but the voice.
"It's an illusion," the same child voice said and in that second the shackles disappeared releasing me and in front of my eyes a little girl with blond straight hair and big blue eyes literally materialized and walked royally towards me. beside her a big tiger followed. Not a semmer with green gleaming on his fur and long sharp fangs, but the good, old tiger from the earth. Also a little squirrel peeked at me from the curtain of her beautiful not too long hair.
"My name is Fabia." She said and outstretched her hand to me. I extended it to shake her and when I did on her back appeared a pair of black as night wings.
"I'm Denny."


A little while earlier

Dorian let me on the marble floor landing with such grace that a dove will surely envy him.
"This is my kingdom. Welcome,' he said to me.
"From what I heard it is not yours. Not yet." I retorted and started walking away.
He appeared in front of me.
Really annoying. How was he doing this?
"You're really frustrating, you know?" he asked.
"It's not my fault you're a fallen angel," I replied looking him in the eye. I felt a pressure on my mind, like he was trying to force me to like him.... his gaze was mesmerizing. I turned my look away. the pressure left. Ghe snorted.
"You don't even know how right you are!" he laughed and I shivered, his laughter was so macabre and full of darkness...
"What do you mean?"
"I mean that you no nothing stupid second world-er!"
I frowned. He really liked theatrical speeches and phrases.
"You see, Denise..."
"Denny," I corrected him. there was only one person calling me Denise and that was Blake and I wanted it to remain the same.
He grinned obviously sensing the background for my correction.
"You see my dearest most not knowing Denise... I could have been what you call angels or guardians of your world... I had that choice... you see, every once in a awhile there are born special children that are gifted in a very special way. They are exceptions for the main LAW. They can pass the portals and still not have to be punished for this because they are born to protect you, to guard you, becoming angels. But they are left the choice.
I had this choice too."
"And you've chosen NOT."
"Yes. That was because a prophecy says that a renegade, a fallen angel will be the king of the First world... and that is me."
Stared at him my eyebrows high.
"is it?" I questioned. He seemed angered by my words.
"Yes!"
"Oh and did you just quote the prophecy? Or is it just your interpretation, your own version of it?" I laughed in his face.
"Just as I thought." I added and turned to stare in a large window. The view was breath stopping.
He rose in the air batting his wings making waves of air sweep through my hair.
"Not impressed." I muttered. He appeared outside the castle right in front of me.
Again that curiosity in my head. How?
"You're right, I didn't quote it. But it's talking only about me. it says that the man will not follow his predestined path, changing the normal course - I didn't follow my angel destiny, breaking the normal path of things, because mo one else before me did that- it says the man will have to fall hard before rising - as you said I'm a fallen angel- and I'm the one ruling right now, so yes. I am the one that the prophet speaks about!"
"Oh My... so much deduction, isn't your head spinning with so much thinking? Genius! You're not the king! Not until Calypso is alive!"
He smashed his fist on the window sill making a crack appear.
He glared at me.
"And if I think better now... my brother is also a perfect candidate, so you're not alone in this..."
And then I stopped. OMG. What did I just do??? He didn't know Keat... Raidan was my brother... he didn't know this and now he did, he could use me now not only against Blake but also against Keat...
Oh My God.... What did I just do????