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the ghost of me (poem)

I'am a ghost

that's nothing new,

i walk around slowly

drifting through.


But despite my apperance

i can't walk through walls

or clear a space in my hall,


all i can do

is sit and stare

watching the clouds

as i go no where,


hoping that one day

this weight'll be gone

leaving me free

leaving me strong.


But till then i sit

gathering dust

my tears long gone

as things start to rust.


and if someone finds me

i only can hope

that they will save me from

this world where i mope

and take me somewhere

i can finally be me

and maybe then

i will start to see


that i'm not a ghost

in the traditional sense,

but a shell

only more dense,

being lost without emotion

has turned me cold

leaving my young soul

tierd and old.


so i sit like a ghost

haunted my me,

my dreaded brain

and its memories.





i dont know if you will get this or not, so please can you try and explain what you think it means so i can alter it if you are getting the wrong idea.
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Another great poem from you.
Rebeca
Rebeca
Sep 30, 2009 03:10
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We all want to be noticed,

Liked, loved or needed...

But we live in a world of self obsessed individuals,

So we are all ghosts in away.

Good theme and well written ;o)

biggabit
biggabit
Sep 29, 2009 12:51
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OMG!!! That was so sad I wanted to hug that person in the poem. And save them.
supernaturalmom
supernaturalmom
Sep 29, 2009 07:05
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yeah its about how they feel like they are nothing but a ghost of what they used to be, and its a never ending circle they want to escape.

thanks for the comments and votes guys!
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escape-again
escape-again
Sep 29, 2009 05:43
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i think dark angel is right.. it is like someone is depressed and alone..
Damonh
Damonh
Sep 29, 2009 02:07
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2 me it sounds like some 1 is describing their emptiness and depressing feelings

i like it
the words makes more sense 2 my sister though:)
Darkinangel
Darkinangel
Sep 28, 2009 16:05
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Very good use of words
Dennis369
Dennis369
Sep 28, 2009 15:43
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