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emotion shapes us (poem)

Finding hope

is but a dream

and as we walk

it stop's and breathes

'dont walk away

from your hopes and fears,

because without them

what is left here?

with each dream shattered

we can't leave behind

all our love

faith and lies,

Because each of them

make up you

they are inside

creating a view

that's hidden from all,

but your eyes

becuse our hopes are a way

of finding our emotions

and shaping our lives'




i'm not that happy with thi one, but it's what came to me in the moment so i feel that i should post it anyway, please comment on what you think...
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Without hope...

all is lost.

It's called depression.

This is a brilliant poem...

Each line speaks a thousand words...

A thousand truths.

There has only been one other poem on wattpad that effected me in this way.

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julliet
julliet
Jan 03, 2010 00:37
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i'm pleased you like, now i have re-read it a few times it is growing on me, but i'm still not to sure on the wording, but hey
escape-again
escape-again
Sep 29, 2009 13:18
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I agre with supernaturalmom...

And like your poem says...

With out hope what have we got?

Well written & 'hope' to read more of your work soon! ;o)
biggabit
biggabit
Sep 29, 2009 12:56
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Oh I'm sorry you didn't like that one, I think its one of my favorites.

I took it to mean:
1. you can't have hope without fear and you can't live without hope.

2.And when one dream or part of your life dosen't work out you start a new one.
supernaturalmom
supernaturalmom
Sep 29, 2009 06:56
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it inspires me... ^_^
i love this one!
Damonh
Damonh
Sep 29, 2009 02:15
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I think it was Ahmazing and it was emotional 2
poisined_silly
poisined_silly
Sep 28, 2009 19:08
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