The Bathroom Stall

The Bathroom Stall|Predictions!

Here are the top five comments that I absolutely loved (I loved all of the comments, but thought these were a little extra badass) from my short little contest. The results were supposed to be a part of Note Forty-One but some of these comments were just way too long.

The contest details can be found in the author's note of the last note, but all my readers had to do was comment on Note Forty with their prediction as to what will end up happening. They could have written a completely ridiculous comment or they could have sleuthed: after all, this is a mystery story. Here we go!

(in no particular order)

@balooba: Being that my mind is so forgetful I will say THIS ENDS IN Sam finds out he has cancer. Tucker and Sam are brothers. Throw in a love triangle. Cora's mom leaves the family for the biker dude down the street. Someone else gets cancer. Cora meets a werewolf. The werewolf is an Alpha. He denies her. She cries. He feels bad. A war starts. Someone gets pregnant. A vampire bites Tucker, turning him into a horse. The horse gets lost, and meets a lady horse that was really a vampire in disguise and so he tries to roast Tucker the horse on a campfire stick and then boyscouts find them and pull out their handy-dandy SMARTPHONES and dial 411 because they forgot the number for 911, so then they got a phone number for a Sears in Alaska in which PLOT TWIST Cora's got a part-time job there to help support the family and escape the werewolf that wants her back. Oh, and she also falls in love with her teacher, who kidnapped her and revealed that his name was Harry Styles, and so Tucker got jealous and went through a mid-life crisis, ending up with him painting his mane rainbow and gluing a paper towel roll to his head in hopes of becoming the mystical unicorn so he'd be a better chick magnet but that didn't work and he only ended up being in a B-rated Horror/My Little Pony Movie. Cora moves to Australia and turns into a coral-snake thing who lives out on the ocean and snacks on coral because ever since I first saw her name that's all I can think of and then Sam followed her and gifted her with the present of a ceremonial goat, but she turned him down because snake/human relationships typically don't turn out well so he went home and fell in love with the vampire that turned Tucker into a horse-corn and then the werewolf came back for Cora and she took him back and then he dropped the bombz which said, "Babez..... my brothers got cancer and I'm..." le gasp, "pregnant with your snake babies."

@_flawed: Have the most outrageous idea? Got it. So Tucker and his cousin happen to not be regular teenage high schoolers with a hormonal mind and grabby hands, but agents in training for the prestigious and unknown society, EPP. The Elite Penguin Protectors. Their first mission they were assigned from the general penguin commander was to retrieve a load of trout stolen by the head principal that he planned to serve at the school dance. The delicious trout was origanlly going to be used to feed starving penguins in South Mexico, they had searched all over for a trout juicy and healthy enough to make even those miserable penguins happy. After hearing that their reput was stolen they came up with a full-proof plan that was sure to get that trout to where it belonged. Their plan was to ask the students if they had seen anything and act on that, but that complicayed and brilliant plan changed when Tucker met Cora at the dance. He wanted so badly to continue and chat with her, but his cousin pulled him away. Due to Tucker's distraction in his importanr mission the EPP program discommissioned him from all work and he was sent to live the regular life of a teen. He had spent all his life nurturing penguins only to have his dream slip through his fingers. His cousin, unlike him, was not decommissioned and happily proceeded to his EPP duties without Tucker. Obviously Tucker was furious that his cousin who he loved and cared for would simply ditch him as such and wished that he would serve a even more worse fate then he did. Tucker's wish came true and during his cousin's next mission he was attacked by a polar bear and died. Tucker felt terribly guilty because of this and thought that it must of been his fault. To punish himself he swore that he would never touch another penguin again. Tucker proceded to go to a normal highscool and it was just his luck when he's sent to the same highschool as Cora. There he forgets about his horrible deed and makes lots of friends, as well as enemies. Specifically, Terrence. A active supporter of the dreaded IHP organization, a.k.a, the I Hate Penguins organization. Terrence has no idea who Tucker is and easily befriends him, not knowing that Tucker has despised him because of his hatred towards his beloved penguins. He knew though that if he could get close to him he would learn more about the IHP organization, and report it to the general penguin commander. He was sure that would be enough to earn his job back and make up for his cousin's loss. So Tucker begins his plan to build a disgustingly fake friendship with Terrence and soon discovers his evil plan that includes Cora! He wants to seduce Cora so he can easily brainwash her into being his evil penguin killing, fish eating machine. Tucker worried about the girl he loves more than penguin spit, tries to help her by sending her warning text, he knows that if he ever talked to her directly about it Terrence would get suspicious. Tucker knowing that he had to do more, contacted the general penguin commander pleading for a second chance, the commander accepts and makes it so that the two are paired together for a school project, therefore, shortening the time Terrence would get to spend with her. As Tucker spent more and more time with Cora he began to fall more in love with her, when the topic of the dance came up he prayed that she would bring up the time he danced with her, he prayed that she would say how charming and wonderful he was, only to have her say, it meant nothing. After that he retreated back into his secretive and shy igloo and kept a distance from Cora. It hurt more than watching a penguin die. ....what did I just write?

Oh my. I just realized how long that was. -dies-.

@Life-Is-A-Melody: So, based on what I can gather, :3 Andrew is the masquerade mystery guy. Terrance is the 'Creepy Stalker'. And... Sam and the rest of 'em want to take over the world and need Cora because she gives great advice and could help them, but they'll trash her afterwards. (;

(By the way, I am completely 100% cereal!)

**** but in all seriousness (is that really a word?) Tucker definitely is the creepy stalker. Otherwise, why would he not give Cora his cell phone number? She'll know the two are the same. Why was he so urgent in getting his phone back from her? Just that, he's the "stalker". I also think Tucker was the masquerade guy. I don't have much to go on for this, but if he wasn't, then why would he be hurt that she didn't know or care who the guy was? Why would he care that it was just a one-time thing for her? As for Sam, he's obviously affiliated with the stranger who called her Carrie and the Andrew guy. One of Cora's friends said that Sam did not have a date to the homecoming dance. That four guys that definitely should don't have dates. I'm assuming that those guys are Terrence, Tucker, Sam, and the stranger(assuming that Terrence hasn't asked his new girl). I think Terrence was the one who started all of that mess, and I think Tucker is warning Cora because he likes her. I think Sam wants to get Cora out to dinner so he can ask her to homecoming, where he'll (most likely) humiliate her when she arrives. I think their plan has to do with homecoming because of the stranger who asked her to homecoming. (By the way, that was crazy. He could've at least figured out her name.) Obviously, it is very important that she goes to homecoming with one of them. The guy wouldn't even tell her his name before she answered, and even then he didn't. ...So, uh, that's my theory.

And if I'm completely wrong, the aliens wrote this.

@theolive78: Tucker is an undercover ninja sent to defend Cora from Sam and his friends, who are scientists from NASA that want to use her asian geniusness to build a rocket to Mars. Terrence is just a douchebag who gets caught in the middle of it. In the end, Tucker and Cora defeat the scientists and, after the battle, Cora confesses that she is the person from the bathroom stall. Girls stop writing on the stall and hate on Cora for lying, but they all secretly admire the fact that she's so good at giving advice. Of course, Cora and Tucker totally go out, eventually get married, and have little ninja genius kids.

@WickedChild257: Okay, well the person she danced with is very important. It's why Tucker is being the creepy stalker. He probably stole the number from Sam's phone or something. So I've deducted that the person Cora danced with was Tucker's now dead cousin, whom Tucker heard all about from his cousin because he had this huge crush on her. Once he died, Tucker started noticing Cora throughout school and such. Throughout this, Tucker developed a crush on Cora. This leaves him feeling guilty and stupid for liking the girl that his cousin was obsessed with. He automatically stops watching her, trying to push her from his thoughts completely, but then he finds out what Sam is trying to do to Cora. So he warns Cora, becoming the creepy stalker. Now, the whole thing with Sam is where you lose me. I've come down to two conclusions. He either really wants her to go to the dance with him where he will completely humiliate her in one way or the other, or he is going to abduct her and make her a sex slave. Either way, he's a pretty shady dude.

So there you have it! Who had the best comment? Post below your thoughts ;)