Run, Run As Fast As You Can!

Okay. So i was just sitting around when i got this story in my mind. I havent written it down, yet... so im just typing it straight from my mind. :)
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i woke up drenched in sweat, breathing hard and crying. I sat up in my bed and recall my dream... of me and my family before...the accident.
*Before the accident*
We were all downstairs talking, laughing, and hugging. It was me and my brother Xabir's birthday. In case your wondering me and Xabir are twins. He was born a couple seconds before me. So anyways...mom says to me, "Sweetie, pose for the picture." While we were opening presents. the cameras flashed on both me and my brother. We were all so happy and then the alarm went off. Dad jumped up and pushed mom, me and Xabir behind him and pushed us out the back door to run away. As we exited the back door a rogue jumped out of the trees and ran at us. Dad transform and attacked the rogue taking him down as we all ran for our lives...except for dad because he was the Alpha of our pack. Mom didnt want to leave him but dad forced us to go, by using his Alpha voice and told me and my brother to take care of each other and we said we would. Then turned and ran as fast as we could. (In case you didnt know we're werewolfs. but me and Xabir havent shifted yet... even tho, we know it will happen today because its our 16th birthday.) We kept running farther and farther all of a suddent more rogues surrounded us. Mom transformed us to protect us. One Rogue lunged but forgot to protect its throat and mom rapped her teeth around his throat and ripped it out. Then the other two rogues lunged at the same time dad showed and helped mom take them down and used the mind link to tell us to keep running and dont look back. So we turned and ran. But stopped and hide behind the bushes and saw 4 more rogues appear......