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[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested

Part 3 of 12
Thorns
by Dillon Collins

The wind is blowing,
the trees sway in place.

It's raining a little,
hitting you in the face.

Your palms are sweaty,
as you think of how far you've come.

Your head is spinning,
as you realize what must yet be done.

Another step is the last thing you think you could do,
but another step is the first thing that must be done to be true.

So we will continue stepping through reproachments and scorn,
pushing onward for the one, who carried our thorns.
[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested

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@StephG yay! You are quickly becoming a awesome fan and I thank you greatly for it.(:
Lampshade37
Lampshade37
Jan 11, 2010 00:41
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wow.
so short yet so..soo...powerful.
yep, you are one power guy. seriously.
just a few simple words and you stir all kinds of emotions in me.
this was amazing...but i expected nothing less!

=)
StephG
StephG
Jan 11, 2010 00:07
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I think what a wonderful way to give him thanks. (And that's what it should be about).



peace out
supernaturalmom
supernaturalmom
Oct 10, 2009 09:22
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I agree wth everyone ths poem is so deep in meaning. I can see the moment in life when people stop and think whether or not to keep walking..but even if the path is difficult and full of pain people keep moving forward, bcz who knows what awaits them in the end..
SapphireStar
SapphireStar
Oct 08, 2009 17:04
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cool stuff
kooolbeanz
kooolbeanz
Oct 01, 2009 11:12
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what i think about it???? i don't know... i don't THINK. i only FEEL after reading it. it wakes so many emotions that cannot be thought. amazing poetry my friend!
alleycat
alleycat
Oct 01, 2009 11:02
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Wow i really really liked it.its deep and...oh i am speechless.
Rebeca
Rebeca
Sep 23, 2009 00:54
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This one is really really nice. Great wording, great meaning. Very... intense. It's a little lighter than your other ones though. The images im getting are kind of like stage-fright. the palms sweaty part. The scorn. Scorn. I love that word. So fresh. I love it overall!!
Sanjana
Sanjana
Sep 21, 2009 16:05
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hey all what do you think? let me know/check out my other works(: thanks!
Lampshade37
Lampshade37
Sep 21, 2009 13:17
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