Sandburn

I realize this is short. i just want to see if you think this is a good idea.

"Acacia, go to the bank and take out $1,000 please."

"Why?"

"I need it. Please just go." My mom sounded tired. I didn't want another fight either.

"Whatever."

I grabbed my keys and jumped into my yellow Porsche. My family was pretty rich but we were not snobby. At least not me, as you could tell from that last conversation with my mom.

After three minutes I made it to Safetrust Fund bank. Inside I was waiting in line when the guy behind me grabbed me. "This is a robbery! Hands in the air!" he shouted

A knife was at my throat. He made me walk to the bank teller. "Give me the money or she will die."

The bank teller opened the safe and let the man in. He kept the knife at my throat as he gathered as much money as he could. And keeping the knife where it was. Outside three police cars pulled up. Guns were pointed at the man and I but the man put me in front of him like a shield. "Shoot and we both die." He yelled

His voice sounded pretty young. I wish I could see his face.

The police tried to make a deal with him. "Just give us the knife and we will get you some help. You don't really want to kill her, do you?"

"I will do what I have to, to save my family." The boy shouted back.

A red mustang pulled up beside us and the door flung open. "Follow us and she dies!" he yelled then pulled us in the back seat. "Drive!" he shouted

It seemed like he loved to say 'and she dies.'

The boy in the front seat slammed his foot down on the gas pedal and we spun out away from the cops. We sped out of the city and the police didn't follow us. Now what? How would I get home now?

Oh no! Poor Acacia! should i continue or not?