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charissssie

on Sep 18, 2009
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This is my first story I made, so don't criticize to much. Hope you enjoy it.

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Chapter 1



Ring! Ring! My alarm clock went off pretty loud. I looked at the time and it was only 6:00 am. I put the clock back on snooze, hoping to get a few minute of sleep. I must've dozed off since I was startled to hear the ringing sound again. Realizing I had to get up, I reluctantly got up. I went inside the shower and did my business. After I was done, I went to my walk-in closet. Yes, a walk-in. I looked at the mirror and I didn't really like what I saw. I was 5"8', so I was pretty tall. But I like my long legs. it's the best part of my body. I have really dark wavy hair that goes to my back. I'm pretty pale, so people call me Snow White. My eyes were chocolate brown. I was pretty fit from cheerleading and other sports since I'm a sporty type of person. But I knew I wasn't pretty.
My family is what you would call, rich. Always had money to spare. But being rich isn't all fun and games, its quite lonely.
"Jacqueline Davis, come down this instant. Your breakfast is getting cold," my nanny, Sarah, yelled. My parents work most of the time, so they are never home. Sarah is like my mom. Well, she's a better mom than my mom.
I put on blue faded skinny jeans and a plain white v-neck. Then I put on my red vans. I ran downstairs before Sarah got mad. Sarah is one of the sweetest women you would ever meet, but she doesn't like to be kept waiting. She will get really mad.
"Don't blow your head off!" I said, then regretted it when I saw the irritating look on Sarah. Here comes the lecture.....ugh.
After 10 minutes of her ranting about showing up on time and all the other stuff she talks about everyday, it finally subsided.
"Look, I would love to hear your speech again, but I'll be late to school," I said, trying to get away. Sarah remembered I still had school and kissed my head for goodbye. Then I went to the garage to my 3rd Generation Prius. Its practically my dream car. I got it for getting my drivers license. I drove to Carter Hills High School, home to the Gorillas. I parked near the entrance since I didn't like to walk. My best friends surrounded me. They were also rich. So they didn't look surprised when I was suddenly driving a Prius.
" Cecilia, Trinity, at least let me get out of my car." I said. Cecilia was a tall beautiful blonde. Her hair goes up to her back and she usually curls it. She was as tall as a model and a body to match it. Her eyes are the prettiest shade of green you'd ever see. She looks like an Greek goddess. Most people would think she was stupid since she was a blonde, but she was one of the smartest people I knew. Trinity was also beautiful. She was a petite brunette. She was small but it looked good on her with her baby face which made her look innocent and guys taking advantage of her because of it. Her chocolate colored hair was short and pointy and it went up to her shoulders, it made her look like a fairy with her fair skin. Her eyes are big and had a cute color of brown. She doesn't give a care about school or studying, even though she still manage to get decent grades, but her true passion is art. That girl could draw!!! So our group is apparently really popular since my girls are so pretty, but I'm so not. Haha. Oh well.
We started walking to class. I saw how jumpy Cecilia and Trinity looked, like they wanted to tell me something juicy.
"So guess what?" Trinity asked.
"What?" I replied, looking really curious. I haven't seen them jump up and down this much in a really long time. Its either there is a gigantic huge sale today or there is a new cute guy in school. Since I never heard news on the sale, I think it's the second choice.
" There are new cute guys in the school!!" Cecilia squealed. Bingo...
"Guys?" I asked, I'm not that oblivious to guys. I actually like to check them out. But, I'm not ready for a serious commitment.
"Yup, Guys!! As in more than 1. There is like 3. EEEK!!" They said freakishly at the same time. The first bell rang and I said bye to each of them, since they had different classes. While walking to my class, I was wondering what the new guys looked like. Right when I walked in, the bell rang. Whoa, I was almost late.




Chapter 2



My teacher eyed me intensely. She didn't like people being late. Feeling uncomfortable, I sat down in my desk in the back. I was a loner in the back. No one sat next to me or behind me. So there is like 3 empty desk around. But my teacher did it so the other girls or guys won't bother me since I'm really popular. But its not like I mind, I like being alone. Then 3 marvelous looking hot guys walked in the room. They were insanely hot, but I don't really like guys just because they're hot. So I ignore them, focusing on getting my stuff out.
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@Canse12 Yeah, I'm new to writing... but thanks for reading my story

charissssie
Sep 22, 2009 17:49
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"They had a dangerous aura..."
Beautiful line, and I love the thing about their eyes.
Very good for a newbie =) (Are you new to writing or publishing your stuff?)
Well done, keep it up!

Canse12
Sep 22, 2009 12:41
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hehe....its nice

nancykn95
Sep 18, 2009 19:32
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i think this has potential!! for a first timer i but i like the whole idea also when you say i did my business it gives off an image like she was going poop lol im sorry but thats the iimage i got lol

jessiecat53
Sep 18, 2009 18:04
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