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on Sep 17, 2009
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Chapter 1

   well you done done me and you bet i felt it
i tried to get you but you're so hot that i melted
i fell right through the cracks
and i'm trying to get back
before the cool done run out
i'll be giving it my bestest
nothin's going to stop me but devine intervention
i reckon its again my turn to win some or learn some

i won't hesitate no more
no more it cannot wait, i'm yours

well open up your mind and see like me
open up your plans and damn you're free
look into your heart and you'll find love love love
listen to the music of the moment maybe sing with me
ah la peaceful melody
its your godforsaken right to be loved love loved love love

so i won't hesitate no more
no more it cannot wait i'm sure
theres no need to complicate
our time is short
this is our fate, i'm yours

i been spending way too long checking my tongue in the mirror
and bendin over backwards just to try to see it clearer
my breath fogged up the glass
so i drew a new face and laughed
i guess what i'm sayin is there ain't no better reason
to rid yourself of vanity and just go with the seasons
its what we aim to do
our name is our virtue

i won't hesitate no more
no more it cannot wait i'm sure
theres no need to complicate
our time is short
it cannot wait, i'm yo-

   Just as the poetic song was ending the oncoming four-wheeler hit my byicle. I could feel my self flying, a dream since I was little, but soon I felt the impact of the sidewalk hit my entire body. 
   And then everything went numb.

"What happened?!?!?"
"Is she alive?"
"Call the medic!!!!"
"Mommy why isn't she moving?"
"AAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!"

   I could hear all the frantic people grouping around me, and then I could see a bright light. I always heard of what could happen when you die, but know one ever really knows. Unless it does happen to you. 
 All of a sudden, I could hear and see the mob of people surounding me, but I wasn't in the middle. And then I saw myself. It was a grosume, bloody form of my usual happy self. There was a pool of blood growing under my body. My arm was broken. I had a deep gash in my forehead. And my clothes were soaked with my draining blood. The parametic finally came and I could see myself being whisked of in the back of the car. After a while people started leaving. Some were crying. 


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@quinntqt Seriously? I thought it was stupid cuz no one commented on it. Wht do you like about it?

Luv_Always_S...
Nov 10, 2009 22:17
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wheres the rest!!! i really like the beginning idea!

quinntqt
Nov 10, 2009 21:58
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I'm such a bad friend.... I'm just now reading this

LuVmEsUmWatT...
Sep 27, 2009 14:58
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