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on Sep 17, 2009
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Invisible


I am invisible for you refuse to see.
I am lonely for you refuse to love me.
I am quiet and shy for you refuse to let me be.


I am invisible because that's the way you want it.
I am in pain because all you want to do is hit.
I am lost because if I ask for help you have a fit.


I met someone today, she wants to be my friend.
She said her help she would lend
until you and I meet our end.


She said I deserve to be free.
She said she can see me.
She said I can be what ever I want to be.


I haven't seen you in a lot of days.
I have a new love who see's me in so many ways.
I have a new life and I forgive you its ok.



peace out

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@mzsbm29 Thankyou
S.N.M.

supernatural...
Oct 30, 2009 16:19
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Brilliant..like totally awesome

mzsbm29
Oct 30, 2009 15:16
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@SevenHart You cant find it, if your not willing to give it.
S.N.M.

supernatural...
Oct 29, 2009 16:51
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The last line gave me chills. I think people search for forgiveness most of their lives. :D

SevenHart
Oct 29, 2009 14:52
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Simply... wow

biggabit
Sep 20, 2009 05:27
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is was pretty in the sense

nicolletteni...
Sep 18, 2009 17:35
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Wonderfull words, touching and to the point you take your readers to knew heights im in constant (and will continue to be) awe of your work well done. very moving words, im impressed ;D x

ladyoflitany
Sep 17, 2009 13:07
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aw this poem is so filled iwth emotion... it's moving. i especially liked the last two stanzas... just so... moving. argh, can't find the right word.
beautiful, supernaturalmom!
sincerely urs, AliceC

alleycat
Sep 17, 2009 08:33
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P.s.this one is my fav.i liked it even more when i read it the 2nd time.

Rebeca
Sep 17, 2009 03:30
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I agree with markopolo.you have that talent which makes your readers connect with your words.i am so happy i am a fan.your work is awesome.

Rebeca
Sep 17, 2009 03:27
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