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JessSaab
JessSaab

Sep 16, 2009
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I Want You Back

wanna hold u close
and feel the pain i wanna kiss ur
smile give u my straight i wanna give u my smile
and takethe pain...the pieaces of my heart are missig u
my eyes gave her promise they'll never let go off
ur heart . my hands were cold when u held them
and my lips started to tremble tear dropped behind
a smile ... that's when i couldn't say GOOD BYE!
i wrote it down for u . . . with my tears
i have wrote . . . i miss u . . . if all
my words didn't touch ur
feelingz and if my tears
didn't make u come
bck then forget
evrything
that i've
wrote
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Lol, i like the idea :P ♥
LoulouWaterloo
LoulouWaterloo
Sep 21, 2009 03:16
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well u succeeded! great job!
alleycat
alleycat
Sep 17, 2009 22:08
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yea i wantedit to look like that !! thnx anw
JessSaab
JessSaab
Sep 17, 2009 10:44
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hey, nice poem. the structure looks like a half of a heart.
alleycat
alleycat
Sep 17, 2009 06:59
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