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gretch73

on Sep 15, 2009
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I placed my hand back in the hat and picked a number out of the hat. "Six" i said and to my surprise i saw. . . Nate stand up. Great! *Note sarcasm*

I walked into the closet seeing Chase smirking at Cooper before the darkness enclosed around me. I could hear Nate breathing close behind me.

"Ally?" Nate said in a soft husky voice.

"Yeh" i replied moving closer to him, may as well get this over with.

"You don't have to do this if you don't want to" he said sounding a bit sad, as if knowing that i didn't want to.

"Why wouldn't i?" i said moving closer to him and wrapping my arms around his neck so that our faces were inches apart. I heard him take in a sharp breath.

"Because i know you like him" the way he said 'him' made me flinch his voice was dripping with venom.

"But what does that have to do with the game?" i replied trying to keep my voice even.

Nate's P.O.V.

I knew she liked him! She didn't even deny it! GRRRR i hate Jacob so much. Oh well this is the perfect time to get her back!

I pulled her closer to me wrapping my arms around her waist. I moved my mouth to hers and slid my tongue along her lips, asking for entry. She gasped and let me in. Our tongues started dancing and i moved my hands down to her butt pulling her legs around me.

This was best moment of my life! Finally after all these years! She probably never even thought of me that way, but all these years i have been longing for her to be mine. Even when my family left, not a day went by that i didn't think about her. The way she laughed the sound so pure it made my heart melt, how when she smiled little dimples would appear and that one day when her heart had been broken i sat with her in my arms, while she scried her sorrows away.

This moment was better than any other memory i had.

We continued kissing, i vaguely heard a voice telling us that time was up but we continued. Just when i was about to break away for breath the door opened.

We abruptly broke apart, Ally jumping down from my arms and looked at Cooper who had scrunched his face up.

"Dude that is something i could have gone my whole life without seeing!" He said squeezing his eyes shut as if that would get rid of the memory.

I just laughed, walked out and sat down once again. I was trying to hide how happy i was and i think that everyone fell for it. Except Chase who was trying to hide the amusement in his eyes. There was also another emotion buried in there but he turned around too fast for me to get a good look at what it was.

Ally's P.O.V.

WOW! There are no other words to explain it. The way Nate had kissed me was so passionately, so filled with emotion it was scary. How long had he felt like this about me?

I continued thinking as i went to sit down. I was pulled out of my thought when someone pulled on my arm.

"Ally are you even listening to me?" asked Emma frowning.

"Umm no sorry what were you saying" i said smiling sheepishly.

"God, your hopeless. I was saying how was it? Was he any good?" Her questions were very fast and quiet i barely heard what she said.

"Um yeh he was" i said still in shock over what had happened. I looked over to Nate who was staring at me our eyes met and it looked like he wanted to say something but i couldn't tell what.

"Yeh he was good or ye-" she was cut off when Cooper called her name out.

"Oh yah! Wish me luck!" she squealed.

She walked up to Cooper and picked a number out of the hat.

"Number nine" she said crossing one hand behind her back.

Coopers eyes lit up and he said "Your lucky day Emma"

I swear i hear her swoon but they walked into the closet before i could be sure. Chase took over the time keeping and i waited for her to come out.

Nate kept looking at me and he looked like he was trying to decide whether or not to come over and sit next to me. I was about to just go sit next to him when i felt an arm around my shoulder. Nates expression turned hostile, i can only guess who this is.

"Nate's a pretty lucky man, Ally" yeh just as i thought, Jacob. He continued whispering in my ear.

"Maybe we could play together next time" his breath was hot on my neck, making me shiver.

"You'd like that wouldn't you?" i said teasingly.

"Darn right i would" he chuckled back.

Just as he was about to say something else Emma and Cooper walked out of the closet. Emma's hair was everywhere and one of the straps on her dress was falling down.

"Do i even want to know?" i asked her as she sat down.

"Well seeing as he's your brother probably not" she sat down in a daze and i just laughed at her.


A/N heyy guys im on a role one out yester day and one out today! BOYAH! lolz anywayz how you like it? i didnt want to go into too much detail because i felt abit weird writin it and its my first time writin something like that lolz! how do you think i went hehehe:) plz comment and vote! you guys are the best XD love you all xx

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hahaha. her and nate belong togethr!! <3 =)

meenaanika
Oct 26, 2009 05:05
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awe nate us a sweetie

paige569
Oct 12, 2009 04:03
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Me too Lexie101...team Nate all the way.You did good Gretch73 :-)

swayo-chica
Oct 03, 2009 10:55
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Team Nate all the way.

Lexie101
Sep 23, 2009 02:27
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bar jacob. he seems sleazy... but it makes it mroe interesting so :)
but ima team... mm probs nate... maybbe chase as well..

Anastasia92
Sep 20, 2009 17:51
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really good. i like it. please write another one soon.

pinkms
Sep 19, 2009 01:49
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omg i love your story!
dont stop writting it !:)

babydoll8901
Sep 16, 2009 21:02
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wrte more plz=]

limegreenbab...
Sep 16, 2009 20:18
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for some reason i dont like jacob or nate... TEAM CHASE....

xbootifulx
Sep 16, 2009 13:42
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I think she should eventually end up with chase and nate ends up falling for some other girl. Great job writting.

chikku
Sep 16, 2009 13:40
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