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    [PG-13] Parents Strongly Cautioned

    Part 20 of 21
    Hi readers!
    This is the last chapter of this story, so enjoy it. I assumed you might consider calling a hitman if I don't post it asap, so I posted immediately after finishing it, and didn't check the grammar (as always lol, only admit it, the excuse this time is way cooler! lol)
    So enjoy as much as you can this last drop of... okay, Imma shout my mouth and let you read the story!
    Enjoy Vote Comment!
    Sincerely yours,
    AliceC


    P.S.

    PLEASE!!! vote on this! because it has the biggest number of votes and i put it on the writing contest.
    thanks!!!!!!!!


    Chapter twenty nine
    soap operas (i hate them but it seems to me they sometimes happen in life lol)

    The music was all around me. its crazy wild alive beats and basses were setting on fire my body. The music was pouring through my system and was like an ignition key for all my senses. It was numbing my brain. I was dancing in the center of the dance floor, not caring about anyone. I suppose another reason for my indifference and music trance was the beer that I drank ten minutes ago. Knowing how my organism reacts to alcohol, I assume you understand that it was enough to make me drunk, but not without senses. Because, frankly speaking, I could feel the stinging pain inside my chest. I didn't think it was the heart, I hoped it was not it.

    I was in this club for the first time. I liked it here, besides, I deserved a break after the hard work with the play.
    And with the... no. not thinking about that.

    A pair of arms wrapped around my waist, hands on my hips, moving in the rhythm of my swaying. I didn't mind. It was a dance and it was better to be danced in two.
    I glanced over my shoulder to see an unfamiliar face of a pretty boy. He smiled at me. I smiled back and continued to dance with my eyes closed.
    I don't remember when I ever felt so free and desperate in the same time, because one part of my mind was aware of the desperation beneath the freedom, but the rest of the brain was smart enough to tell the small part to fuck off.

    "What's your name???" the guy asked, yelling in my ear.
    "What???" I yelled back.
    "Wan' a beer?" oh, that I understood.
    "YEA!" I replied laughing like a fool.

    After the second sip, a so familiar hand grabbed my arm and spun me around to face the owner of that hand - Mister Ian O'Malley.
    I stared at his chest for a second, then raised my amused gaze at him.

    "Problems?" I asked. Smirking.
    "I think I should take you home. You're not sober." He said, frowning and obviously upset by my smirk. I smirked even more: take this!

    "Ah... do you mean I'm tipsy?" I demanded. The amused look from my face never disappearing.
    He started dragging me after him, "Come on, Felicity, don't act childish. I'll take you home or you'll do something that you'll regret afterwards..." he was saying to me.
    I grabbed the guy that danced with me and feeling the resistance Ian stopped and stared at me.

    "I don't need your help!" I told him. "You're not my daddy, you're not my mommy, you're practically no one to me. besides, there is someone to take care of me... Ummm..." I turned to the guy.
    "What's your name again?" I asked.
    "Smith!" he replied shooting a brilliant grin to Ian.
    "See? Smithy is gonna take me home! Now f*ck off!"

    He stared in my eyes for a long tensioned moment and then let go of my arm and walked away.
    My heart moaned in pain, begging for me to run after him, to say I'm sorry...

    -You too can f*ck off. I told her.
    - Why do you have to act like a total idiot! Why would he act like he cared if he doesn't??? she, my heart demanded, furious.
    -Just shut up. I don't... I can't think about this right now.

    I gritted my teeth and turned to the guy that called himself Smith.
    "And what's your name, pretty girl?" he asked.
    Argh. Another total moron.
    "Brianna!" I replied and began walking away. towards the dance floor. He walked after me.

    Oh hell. Let it be. He doesn't deserve my sufferings, I kept telling me. and then I got lost into the notes again. I was barely aware that Smith was right behind me.
    Soon I was all hot with the music and the dance. Somehow the ring in the middle had made place for my free dance, I was moving my body like I never did, putting as much passion in each move as my heart wanted to cry. I began considering ripping it off and throwing it in a pit. In a dark, dark pit.

    The track ended and a slower one began, I turned to leave when the guy... Smith, grabbed my face and kissed me. After the tenth part of a second of a total stupefaction i reacted instinctively. Breaking Smithy's jaw.

    [PG-13] Parents Strongly Cautioned

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    wow i really liked this story!!!!! awww ian and felicity together!!! so sweet!!!!;-)
    sweetmapy
    sweetmapy
    Feb 03, 2010 12:20
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    awww poor teddy bear..hahaha even though im laughing hysterically!!!
    r-ash-n-l
    r-ash-n-l
    Jan 17, 2010 18:14
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    aaaaaahhh the best freakin story ever!!!!!!!!!!!! i love i love i love x100000000 .... uve outdone urself Alleycat! i have no words ... i kept laughin n smiling through out the story n i love Ian!!!!! n felicity young is so kool!! im in love with this story!!... the BEST! ok i need to stop with the exclamation points! (oops hehe)... nyws i really loved it... thats all i can say!...

    Huge Fan.... Mia Cat
    MiaCat
    MiaCat
    Nov 19, 2009 06:14
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    savage !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    xXXXnaomiXXXx
    Nov 07, 2009 13:54
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    wow. this was amazing!!!!!!!!!!! i loved each single bit of it! felicity and ian rock!!!
    great story!
    01ImMe
    01ImMe
    Oct 23, 2009 10:41
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    LOVED IT!! :D
    alottay
    alottay
    Oct 23, 2009 02:24
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    brilliant jus fantabulous!!!!!!! plzplzplz wit cherrys on top ryt a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    xxxalixxx
    xxxalixxx
    Oct 17, 2009 14:01
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    i love ur story u r a good writer! and i have a SUGGESTION that if u do i will love, i think (if its not that much of a problem) u should write the whole story over from when Ian got hit in the head with a laptop by FELICITY all in IAN'S POV!!! i will LOVE u for it!!!
    AvrilLavigne
    AvrilLavigne
    Oct 14, 2009 16:00
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    THAT WAS HILLARIOUS MAN!!R SUCH A GOOD RITER
    blazing_angel12
    blazing_angel12
    Oct 09, 2009 03:08
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    OMG i totally loved your story keep righting x
    arianne94
    arianne94
    Oct 03, 2009 12:10
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