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Ok people i made my first poem (not really first first but first here) if you want to know its about my puppy (i lluved her alot and). My dad took her away, and that really hurt.
Why?
Why do you take her?!
Why did you take the only calming thing in my life away?!
Do you enjoy the tears that run down my cheeks?
Do you enjoy making them race?
Such a silly thing to do.
You just had to disturb the peace.
My state of mind.
You took the only thing that kept me sane.
Kept me from screaming, from crying.
You just had to take it out on her.
On me!
It hurts more and more
I mourn at the thought of her.
My heart breaks at what you did
But do you care?!
No.
You say you do but these tears in my eyes dont think so,
They dont think that taking her would solve anything.
Now im left mumbling to myself
The same words,
Over and over in my head:
Why did you take her?
Why?
Why do you take her?!
Why did you take the only calming thing in my life away?!
Do you enjoy the tears that run down my cheeks?
Do you enjoy making them race?
Such a silly thing to do.
You just had to disturb the peace.
My state of mind.
You took the only thing that kept me sane.
Kept me from screaming, from crying.
You just had to take it out on her.
On me!
It hurts more and more
I mourn at the thought of her.
My heart breaks at what you did
But do you care?!
No.
You say you do but these tears in my eyes dont think so,
They dont think that taking her would solve anything.
Now im left mumbling to myself
The same words,
Over and over in my head:
Why did you take her?
[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested
Comments & Reviews ^topthey took my puppy away too :(, anyways i love this poem :)  Ch1ld0fCynt4r Dec 02, 2009 15:39 reply spam amazing
and when i was little i had to give up some of my puppies because they needed homes with less people so i totally knw how u feel  twine2twin Nov 16, 2009 13:24 reply spam @netwave@aquachick1212 thanks and my dad took my puppy away cus she was too destructive... )':
@silencedMANNY thanks...  musikluver Nov 13, 2009 19:39 reply spam wow that was soo sad. but who was u like talking 2 did someone kill ur puppy or something ?
anyway i think bcause u didnt rhyme it made it come more from the heart :D good job :P  netwave Nov 09, 2009 10:01 reply spam I rhyme my poetry because if I dont, it doesnt soound like a poem to me. But after reading this, I thought that you can make any genre of writing sound good! This is one of the best poems I've ever read on wattpad and in my life! You're greeat!
 Blue1024 Oct 31, 2009 08:53 reply spam its really amazing! why would anyone take your puppy away? im so sorry...  aquachick1212 Oct 25, 2009 19:54 reply spam omigod, this is amazing!
i love it! i wish i could write poetry like that.  lilpinkchickie Oct 10, 2009 21:22 reply spam |
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