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[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested
" ugh another day of awful high school," i moaned out loud.
Does anyone really like highschool? Well except for the cool kids; which i hated by the way. Well you would to if you were constantly made fun of, since kindergarden i might add. I couldnt blame them really, i was as akward as they come. braces, curly brown hair that did me no good in this constant stream of humid wheather. I was not a total loser, but defanitley middle class.
"Clarey, get down here now! Your going to be late."
If i hated school then i defanitley hated Sarah. My new step mother who was a total bitch and made my life a constant living hell.
"I'm coming," i shouted down the stairs.
on the way to school we passed a boy i had never scene before, he was riding a bike and was heading in the direction of our school. he looked cute and glanced in my direction as we passed by. i quickly ducked my head and slumped in my seat. i didnt want to look like i was staring. Even though i was.
when i got to school my best friend Tiff was waiting for me. A huge grin on her face as she jumped up and down anxiously for me to join her.
"Have you scene him?" she asked.
"What scene who?"
"The new kid. He's positively gorgeous, i hear he lives on your street and just moved here from New York."
"I thin i past him on the way."
we headed to our lockers and the same boy walked down the hall and stood right besides me. Oh My Gosh could this boy some hoe be seeking me out to talk to me his first day i thought excitedly.
i stood there staring at him and he looked back at me, only he was loking at me wierdly.
"Hi." i said trying to keep a casual stance and arch my eyebrow in a seductive way. "Im clarey, did you neeed something?"
"Umm actually.. your blocking my locker."
oh crap...
"Oh," i blushed getting out of the way. "sorry about that.
man that was embaressing. i glanced at Tiff and she was trying to restrain her laughter.
i narrowed my eyes at her and stomped off towards class.
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this is just the begining of chapter 1
Does anyone really like highschool? Well except for the cool kids; which i hated by the way. Well you would to if you were constantly made fun of, since kindergarden i might add. I couldnt blame them really, i was as akward as they come. braces, curly brown hair that did me no good in this constant stream of humid wheather. I was not a total loser, but defanitley middle class.
"Clarey, get down here now! Your going to be late."
If i hated school then i defanitley hated Sarah. My new step mother who was a total bitch and made my life a constant living hell.
"I'm coming," i shouted down the stairs.
on the way to school we passed a boy i had never scene before, he was riding a bike and was heading in the direction of our school. he looked cute and glanced in my direction as we passed by. i quickly ducked my head and slumped in my seat. i didnt want to look like i was staring. Even though i was.
when i got to school my best friend Tiff was waiting for me. A huge grin on her face as she jumped up and down anxiously for me to join her.
"Have you scene him?" she asked.
"What scene who?"
"The new kid. He's positively gorgeous, i hear he lives on your street and just moved here from New York."
"I thin i past him on the way."
we headed to our lockers and the same boy walked down the hall and stood right besides me. Oh My Gosh could this boy some hoe be seeking me out to talk to me his first day i thought excitedly.
i stood there staring at him and he looked back at me, only he was loking at me wierdly.
"Hi." i said trying to keep a casual stance and arch my eyebrow in a seductive way. "Im clarey, did you neeed something?"
"Umm actually.. your blocking my locker."
oh crap...
"Oh," i blushed getting out of the way. "sorry about that.
man that was embaressing. i glanced at Tiff and she was trying to restrain her laughter.
i narrowed my eyes at her and stomped off towards class.
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this is just the begining of chapter 1
[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested
Comments & Reviews ^topYou have a good start. You've created interest. You've given the reader a glimpse into your characters home life and mindset. Now you need to build on it. Use a spell checker.  tigertim59 Mar 07, 2010 19:04 reply spam lol sounds good needs a little more detail into her life though  Vampqueen97 Feb 17, 2010 17:05 reply spam |
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