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The Island (2)

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Chapter One

I looked around me, puzzled and confused and terrified.

People were screaming, some where crying others looked dazed like my self.
The plane had crashed - straight into another one. Both planes were in pieces everywhere. One person was trapped underneath a bit I ran forward and shoved it away and pulled the unconscious person out. I checked the pulse. Dead. I backed away, feeling like crying. I looked around me. People were in the water.

"oh god" I mouthed, a bare whispered.

I ran, straight in. The first person I came to was a young girl, fifteen, maybe sixteen. I dragged her from the water and went straight into CPR, I tiled her back and checked if she was breathing. She wasn't I pinched her nose and covered her mouth with mine and I blew. I saw her chest rise. A small movement but noticeable. I did two breaths. She didn't move much through. I began pumping on her chest,

"one, two, three.." when I reached 28 she coughed water up and made a strange spluttering noise. She blinked and her eyes seemed to focus. Her eyes were bright green and her hair black and long, but soaked and messy. She seemed tiny and slim.

"are you ok?" I asked concerned. She coughed loudly again and for the first time I noticed her leg.

It was shredded, blood was everywhere. Damn I hoped she was okay. Suddenly and unexpected she pushed me away and jumped up, ignoring anyone or thing around her she ran - straight back to the water. She was sobbing and screaming

"David!!!" I watched for a second surprised.

She might have to lose a leg and yet she's running, running so fast it seems unbelievable someone in her state could do so. I got up and quickly dashed after her. I pulled her back and onto the ground. She was surprisingly strong.

"David! David! David!" was all she screamed as she struggled wildly.

"who? Who is David!" I shouted, holding her down. She just carried on screaming that name.

I held her up gently by her forearms. "is he in the water?" I demanded

"I-I-I I don't know.." suddenly her eyes glazed over and they drifted towards the water.

"David" she whispered. I turned my head and saw a boy almost identical to her pulling himself and someone else out of the water.

She struggled more harder against me. "I'll get him!" I said " stay here."

She paused in her struggling, and nodded, her skin was pale and clammy and a unhealthy sheen of sweat covered her. I got up, almost unsure and ran towards the guy. He had hair as dark as hers and hair as black as hers, he was tall and slim but looked better than his sister.

"David?" I said making it more a question. His head snapped towards me.

"you are David?" I said to make sure. He nodded, looking scared. "I have, erm, I think its your sister." I said unsure if they actual were siblings. Maybe they were twins.

"you have raven!" he gasped I pointed to her and he said:

"look after this person, please." and he bolted.

The person lying there was a young boy, a child really. His skin was dark and his hair short and almost frizzy from the water. I picked him up, and check his pulse, he was breathing thankfully. His eyes shot open a second later. They were as brown as his skin. He began crying, he looked about eleven or twelve. Oh dear lord, send someone to help us. Where the hell were we anyway?

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oooh good just wish it was a bit longer

sarahbw14
Sep 19, 2009 01:25
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AWESOME i like smiled through whole thing

Tifa4eva
Sep 08, 2009 18:14
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