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Part 2 of 14
Ally's P.O.V.

I was brushing my and hair inspecting my outfit, my cream singlet top, denim short shorts and my roman sandals, when i heard the knock on the door.

(To see her outfit http://media.photobucket.com/image/cream%20singlet%20top%20and%20denim%20short%20shorts/sophtastic/BLOG/2009/P1020862A-1.jpg )

I ran down the stairs, bumping into Cooper on the way and opened the door to be squeezed into a bug bear hug by someone big. Nate.

"Heyy Nate" i said wheezing god he was strong! "Please. . . Let. . Go!" he laughed and put me down.

Hi Chase" i said hugging him, he stiffened and then hugged me back.

"Come out side and see what Ally's done to the place" said Cooper breaking up our hellos.

He led them down the hall to the backyard. I heard a gasp form Nate.

"Wow Ally you did all this?" he asked and Chases mouth popped open.

"You like it" i giggled. I mean it wasn't that great. I just put up tiki torches every were, put the tent up and lit the fire. It would look better tonight.

"Are you kidding it's amazing!" exclaimed Chase throwing his hands in the air.

"Well i did my best with the time I had" i said and Cooper chuckled.

"She was running around like mad trying to get everything just right for tonight" he laughed.

"Oh shut up Coop!" i said nudging him.

"So what do you wanna do first?" asked Chase.

"Well i was thinking that we might see a movie? I really wanna see The Ugly Truth and i haven't got a chance yet, do you wanna go?" I asked looking at Nate.

"Yeah sure" he said shrugging.

"Oh and if you don't mind i was gunna see if Emma wanted to come too?"

"Emma, who's Emma?" asked Chase.

"She's my girlfriend" said Cooper smirking.

"Oh shut up, no she's not, she's my best friend and I want you to meet her, i know she'll love you guys" i said winking. They just laughed and we all headed out to our cars.

"Oh my god Ally you got it!" said Nate stroking the hood of my Audi R8. I had wanted it ever since it first came out and i would never shut up about it. (Little unknown fact about me i was a total rev head, but no one knew except these guys)

"I knew you would love it! I got it for my 16th!" i shrilled.

"Are you kidding she's a beauty!" he said smiling down at me.

"I'll call Emma and tell her that you will pick her up" i said to Cooper "If you don't mind i want to ride in mine with Nate" Nate just beamed as soon as he heard the words escape my lips.

"Sure tell her we'll be there in 10" he said smirking "this is going to be fun" he whispered to Chase but i managed to hear.

Emma was happy enough to ride with Cooper and another one of his 'hot' friends. Ha i love that girl. But i totally agree. Only wish i could be there when she see's Chase for the first time.

I got in my car with Nate while Cooper and Chase got in his Hummer H2. I know our cars rock!

"So Ally. . ." Nate said looking awkward.

"Oh hey, how did things end up with Kristy?" she was his first girlfriend and i never got to ask him how it worked out.

"Not too well" he said laughing bitterly. "It turns out she was only with me because she like Chase!" he said angrily.

"Awww, really? Sorry to hear that" i said rubbing his shoulder. He relaxed at my touch.

"Yeah but whatever right, and what about you huh? I heard some kids at the mall talking about you, seems like your hot goss" he said wiggling his eyebrows.

"Oh who was it?!" i hate it when people talk about me behind my back. "Was it Joey? Argh! I hate him!" i huffed angrily.

"Um i don't know but whoever it was they said that you were 'one sexy beast'" he said air quoting the guys exact words.

"Stupid pigs!" i muttered to myself. Okay so i wasn't the most innocent girl at school but still i wasn't the worst! You should see this girl Emma. Nah only joking.

He just laughed and look out the window. We got to the mall in a couple of minutes. We got out and waited for the rest of the gang.

"Do you remember Dylan Davis?" i asked Nate. Dylan was the dorkiest looing kid ever and he would always get bagged out for it. Me, Nate and Charlotte always used to stand up for him.

"Yeh, what about him?" he asked coming around to my side of the car.

"Well now he's like one of the hottest guys at school" i laughed at the thought of Dylan being hot. Nate just stared at me with a strange expression on his face, jealousy? No it couldn't be. He leaned closer to me and looked deep into my eyes, his face was inches away from mine. His eyes flickered down to my lips and he froze.

The others pulled up seconds later and Nate quickly pulled away blushing.
"Hey Ally" Emma said jumping out of the car, she had the biggest smile on her face. I'll have to ask her what happened later.

"Hey Emma this is Nate my oldest best friend" i said wrapping my arm around his waist. "Nate this is Emma my newest best friend" i said smiling between the both of them.

"Nice to meet you Nate" Emma sad cheeking him out, and liking what she saw, Oh looks like Cooper might have some competition. Hehehe.

"Pleasure" he said shaking her hand.

"Come on the movie is about to start!" I said pulling Nate inside and the others followed.

A/ N heyy guys sorry its been so long since i updated busy with skool and assignments! ARGH hate them! lol any way i will try to upload as soon as i can i had a majoy writers block! thnx and plz keep readin commenting and votin!!
lv ya all!! <3
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leleberry6
leleberry6
Jan 12, 2010 15:01
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LOVE IT.... i like the idea that u write the story from different people's point of view.. keep it up xx
redroses93
redroses93
Dec 12, 2009 09:02
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love it!
purplelovercutiepie
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Nov 27, 2009 18:51
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love it
sweetdreamz
sweetdreamz
Nov 26, 2009 21:51
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oh i love it and that car is my fave! i really want 2 get it lol i love how u write
hayleylou
hayleylou
Nov 12, 2009 14:14
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ooh, im liking it^^
jannyfer42
jannyfer42
Oct 15, 2009 14:56
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OHH do continue! I am loving it
chikku
chikku
Sep 16, 2009 11:26
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awh... its getting good. hope u write more soon.
smaciel04
smaciel04
Aug 31, 2009 11:09
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thnx so much if u hav any sujestions for what should happen tell me im always open to new ideas hehe!
gretch73
gretch73
Aug 31, 2009 05:01
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i love it hun!!!
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