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[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested

Part 4 of 13
-Little Glass World-


My little glass world is cracking.
Too many people stand on it.
I'm trapped inside
and little do I attempt to keep it intact.

How long will this go
before it breaks?
before I break..

I'm crying
thinking that I'm on my own,
thinking that I can only rely on myself
when I don't really trust myself.

I'm crying
thinking that I'm all alone.
But am I really alone
or do I perceive that I'm alone
but actually I'm not?

I'm crying
thinking that maybe I'm too blind
maybe I'm too self-centered
maybe I don't deserve to be saved.

My little glass world is cracking.
Soon it will shatter..
and I will pick up the pieces,
I will try to rectify my life.



***
...just trying to pour out my feelings into words.
I don't know whether or not it turns out into something worth reading..
[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested

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yes it was worth reading... thank you :)
islene01
islene01
Dec 14, 2009 21:35
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its beautiful
nicollettenikki
nicollettenikki
Oct 07, 2009 23:32
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something about it is bittersweet- like its beautiful, but heart-breaking all at the same time.
very lovely<3
rachloves2write
rachloves2write
Sep 23, 2009 00:47
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Wow this is.....this is.....I’m speechless!
Very beautiful, wonderful, amazing, creative brilliant!
DeathBaby
DeathBaby
Sep 08, 2009 01:56
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Words cannot express how grateful I am to be supported by wonderful writers >.<
Ladyoflitany, Faith, and Lady Sakura..thank you so much!
SapphireStar
SapphireStar
Sep 07, 2009 01:02
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its totally worth reading it really deep and amazing i really like it:)
sakura_riot
sakura_riot
Sep 06, 2009 17:32
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Wonderful just spectacular. I could see it all happening. It's an amazingly sad poem. :( Hope you are ok. :D Get better. :D

Keep writing it's what you were born to do. :D

<3 ~Undescribable~ ~Faith~ <3 xo
Undescribable
Undescribable
Sep 04, 2009 08:31
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i agree with damoh and AliceC powerfull imagery! the way constructed each verse was like a picture revealed in my mind. i could put images to your words and that an extremely deadly talent, when you described how the glass would shatter i could imagine this like little glass dome over me, i swear i could the crack begining to appear! k im rambling eek i just want to finish of by saying you reminded me why i love this site, its the connection to the writer and thewords rather than hte story itself that does it for me. there are some shallow writers here on wattpad but your writing has such passion its really amazing well done!
ladyoflitany
ladyoflitany
Sep 02, 2009 02:05
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Thank you Yna..you've jst cheered me up..I'm glad I join wattpad bcz I meet some nice and amazing people here including you :-)
Thank you AliceC..I'm so happy if you like my work :-) I've been meaning to read your story for ages but I havent got the time T.T
SapphireStar
SapphireStar
Aug 31, 2009 08:02
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i'll vote too! first i'll comment :)
The line 'my little glass word is cracking' has a very powerful image in it, and a certain musicality... though i know it's a metaphor i still saw in my head a girl and the glassy world that is about to crack... and it's definetely worth reading!
alleycat
alleycat
Aug 31, 2009 04:44
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