i agree with damoh and AliceC powerfull imagery! the way constructed each verse was like a picture revealed in my mind. i could put images to your words and that an extremely deadly talent, when you described how the glass would shatter i could imagine this like little glass dome over me, i swear i could the crack begining to appear! k im rambling eek i just want to finish of by saying you reminded me why i love this site, its the connection to the writer and thewords rather than hte story itself that does it for me. there are some shallow writers here on wattpad but your writing has such passion its really amazing well done!
Thank you Yna..you've jst cheered me up..I'm glad I join wattpad bcz I meet some nice and amazing people here including you :-)
Thank you AliceC..I'm so happy if you like my work :-) I've been meaning to read your story for ages but I havent got the time T.T
i'll vote too! first i'll comment :)
The line 'my little glass word is cracking' has a very powerful image in it, and a certain musicality... though i know it's a metaphor i still saw in my head a girl and the glassy world that is about to crack... and it's definetely worth reading!