My Poems

Poem #1:Love, Pain, Hate

The dark’s supposed to subside

when the clouds in the sky collide

the lighting that flashes in the air

helps her to hold on and bear

the pain and the loss

when he didn’t give a toss

about her, and he lied in this way

and never wiped her tears away

She loves him, she hates him

but the only thing he does is love himself…

Note: That poem tossed off in my head at 1.00a.m. and I created in 5-10 minutes. It’s my 1st ENGLISH poem and my 3rd (Greek poems included) –if you count 2 stupid poems I had written when I was younger. That one was a bit random and I don’t know if it makes sense. So, tell me what ya think it’s about and don’t forget, it’s my first one!! :)

P.S. I’m dedicating this one to the first who gives me constructive criticism with a comment! Thanks!:)

xxxx

Dimitra