The Black School

On a bright and sunny day like any other, I walked to school with my best friend, Neveah. Neveah was once again complaining about her sister, Lynsey. "She's so annoying. I can't stand her, and your not even listening," said Neveah. "I'm so sorry, but your always complaining and I always wanted a sister," said Luna. "Yeah On a bright and sunny day like any other, I walked to school with my best friend, Neveah. Neveah was once again complaining about her sister, Lynsey. "She's so annoying. I can't stand her, and your not even listening," said Neveah. "I'm so sorry, but your always complaining and I always wanted a sister," said Luna. "Yeah well she's always complaining about me" said Neveah. "Yeah well can you shut up long enough for us to get to school," said Luna "Fine "said Neveah,"but still who does she think she is always bossing me around like she does?" said Neveah "That's it! If you dot stop talking about her you can walk by yourself from now on!!" exclaimed Luna "O.k. o.k. I'll just talk about something else," said Neveah. The two walked in silence for several minutes. Both try to think of something to break the unbearable silence. Finally as they neared Pine Ridge Jr. High, Luna said," I'm hungry." Neveah burst out laughing, and between giggles she managed to say," Luna, your always hungry. Your smaller than me yet you some how manage to eat twice as much as me." By that time they had reached school and were making their way to the quad, the place where everyone hung out before school and in between classes, to find their friends. Neveah spotted Bellez skipping toward Luna. Bellez was a fifth grader that Luna had "adopted", meaning she looked after her and helped her with homework and anything else she needed. Then Luna seen Bellez and starts to run towards her. When they reach each other, they hugged for what seemed like forever. Just then the bell rung but it was like 10 minutes early. They decided to head in to find out why the bell had rung .When they were inside the school everything was pitch black. Bellez grabbed Luna's arm, just as Neveah grabbed Luna's arm. Suddenly Bellez was gripping Luna's arm tighter. She sounded as if she was crying. While Luna was comforting Bellez, Neveah had let go of Luna's arm. Luna had thought she let go so she could comfort Bellez easier, but when she was done she couldn't find Neveah. Then Bellez was gone being pulled away from Luna....

Didn't expect that did you? Now what do you thinks going to happen, tell me and it might end up i9n the story with credit to you, of coarse. Ok every one this is something I wrote for my schools newspaper it is the first edition of a four part story. If u like the first part vote on it and I will post the second , third and fourth part. But u need to vote it higher than 10 votes or I won't post them.