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on Aug 24, 2009
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Hey Everybody!!! This is the shining moment. This is what you've been waiting for. This is IT!

So first you must vote.

Otherwise It's not as cool.

Or you can vote at the end.

But you MUST vote.

And comment (if you aren't too choked up, LOL, but that is a hint...)

And BTW One of the ideas in here (which isn't fully devolped yet, but it will be) is from NeySheree16. I give full credit of it to her. (I'll tell you what the idea is at the end.)

OK, enjoy.



Chapter 16-Zach's POV:

Emma sat with her arms crossed glaring out into the drizzling rain. It was starting to bother me, her long silence. I had to talk.

"Just stick with me, OK?" I said. I was a little worried about how the guys would treat a girl. Hell, I knew how'd they treat her. Not good.

"Whatever," she mumbled. Silence again.

"Because these guys are cool, but a little immature around girls."

She looked a little frustrated, "OK, that's nice."

"So you'll watch out for yourself?" I asked, a little relieved.

"Dammit yes! Why does no one think I can take care of myself!? I. Am. Seventeen. I've lived all by myself for like six months! I know how to get a credit card, make people respect you, and for sure as hell know how to pick my friends! And I know who's bad and who's not! Jeesh!" she yelled.

I fidgeted, "I didn't mean to upset you or anything..." I said, gulping.

She sighed. "No it wasn't you. Just an unfinished argument with Josh."

Man, that Josh. He knows exactly how to push her buttons huh?

Emma's POV:

I felt a little bad at snapping at Zach, but so much worse for another thing. For yelling at Josh. I told him to stay away from me, but did I want that? Not really, not at all, actually.

I missed Josh ALREADY.

Unacceptable, totally and completely wrong Emma! Not only do you HATE HIM (remember that?) but also missing him is a bit too much. How much more before I have to admit I'm cheating on Justin?

That sounded so wrong, I never even THOUGHT of doing that just a mere four days ago. FOUR DAYS?!? That's all it's been? And I'm already missing and thinking of another guy more than Justin? Am I some kind of slut?

If I kiss someone else. Yeah, I'm not a horrible person or have cheated on someone until I kiss someone. I smiled. I'll never kiss someone, so I'll never cheat. Yes! I felt so much better at once.

I was still smiling when we pulled up to the building.

"Starbucks?" I asked through my laughter.

He grinned, probably in relief at my mood change, "Just you wait."

We got out of his shiny corvette and he grabbed my hand and pulled me into the...Starbucks? Um...what happened?

Where there should be a coffee counter (I know, I work at a Starbucks!) there was a kitchen table-like thing. It was huge and rectangular with a single chandelier hanging unsteadily above it. There were no other tables in direct sight, but one long narrow hallway towards the table. I chocked down the claustrophobia.

Eight doors lined the hallway as we squeezed down the path.

"Uh," I said, one shoulder hitting the wall, the other hitting Zach, "Roomy."

Zach laughed, "I've never gone down it with two people. I guess we could've went single file." There was no more room to fall behind him, so we were stuck this way. Very smooth.

I gasped when I finally realized what was wrong about this Starbucks. There were no windows. None. It looked there were from the outside, but there wasn't. Not a single one.

I voiced that to Zach and he shrugged, "We are a SECRET organization."

"Ooh, creepy," I sang.

We practically fell into the table room. People laughed.

I blinked and looked around, the room was actually huge. Balloons, punch table, air hockey, this room had everything. The table was suddenly the small item. And, I sighed with relief, there was an alternative exit.

Well, this Starbucks was just full of surprises, huh? (And not to mention three times as big as mine.)

Tyler walked over, shaking his head. "Shoulda known the first girl would be you." I punched his arm and laughed.

"Hell yeah you should've!"

He grinned and I thought, he used to be a creepy pervert, but now he was-what? A friendly pervert? Either way we were kind of friends.

Zach looked at me with a question in his eyes. I shrugged and Tyler saw someone else he knew and walked away.

"Tyler?" Zach asked.

I smirked, "Not my poster child friend, but..." I shrugged.

"He's MY poster child friend," Zach muttered darkly. Oh joy.
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this is to good i really like it you should do one in drakes pov

twilightfrea...
Sep 03, 2009 15:22
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ohi loved it im glad u made the idea real its way better than it sounded to me cuz im like a chicken about my ideas and my stories. my mo keeps bugging me about posting them but me being me ... chicken. still i cant wait till they get in the jungle oh and try some otherwold music like somewhat rainforest like so u can get a feeling of the beauty and terror of it at the same time its crazy. love ya 8)

NaySheree14
Aug 29, 2009 11:45
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YES I AM YOUR NUMBER ONE FAN !!!! Yeh !! Whoo !! * number one see I don't understand how I'm number one it was just a book before now I'm number * do you like my singing !! I know it's great like your book !!! So keep writing mush .. I don't have any ideas .. Exept drake should " change " his "ways" and fall for Emma ... And Stacy should be dying like falling of a cliff or something and Josh or zach should save her .. And then she should actually die at the fountains .. Muhahah !!!!!! Hehe .. Man I did actualy had some ideas .. Well I did have to write this twice my brother exited it so I did get I bit of time to think .... Anyways I luuuuuurved it !!! I'm like obsessed with ur book * Why you so obsessed with me? Boy, I wanna know Lyin' that you're texin' me when everybody knows
It's clear that you're upset with me Finally found a girl that you couldn't impress Last guy on the earth still couldn't get this * sorry I love to sing .. Badly ..:( .. Ha.. But the last guy on the earth thing is funny cuz that's the title of the book .. I'm gunna stop talking now I'm getting sleepy .. Zzzzzz .. Wait ! Mmmm..What ? Mmmmm.. I didnt eat your cheese .. Mmmm .. What sorry fell asleep .. Not really .. But I am tired sooo I'm going to sleep now .. Cya .. Love the chap .. Cya .. Write soon .. Cya .. Bye ... Zzzzzz.... Mhh .. Pie .. Zzzz

siunibooni
Aug 24, 2009 21:31
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lol!! that was awsome!!! upload soon!!

vampirequeen...
Aug 24, 2009 18:06
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