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[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested
My Turf (A Twilight Fanfiction) Chapter 4
---Hey guys! Here is chapter 4!
I just want to send a HUGE thanks to danny2009 your advise was really helpful. Your right I shouldn't end my story because not may people read it, I need to wright it for the fans I do have :). So I'm dedicating this story to you danny2009!
I still need in answer on POV's do you guys want it as just bella'd POV or do you want everyone elses as well?---
Chapter 4
What I saw made my mouth drop open and my breath to become raggid.
Edward reached over to Tanya beside him, he interupted Tanyas and Jessicas conversation and wispered something in her ear. She giggled and turned to him. He pressed his lips onto hers. I gasped.
All the way from the other side of the lunch room I could see him stick his tounge in her mouth. Suddenly my gaze was pulled away from Edward as Tyler grabed my chin and began lowerin my mouth to his. I panicked. I don't want to kiss Tyler!! I'm embarrassed to admit I've never kissed anyone before, and I don't want Tyler to be my first.
My mouth was now a few inches from his lips. I shot a frantic glance at Alice but her Rose and Ag were to engrossed in conversation to notice. Our lips were just about to touch. I felt like screaming but I couldn't.
"Hey!" A voice made us both jump apart. I felt like jumping up and down with joy, we didn't kiss!!! I looked up to see Edward Cullen standing at our table. I then realized he was the one to interupt. My cheeks flushed a deep red.
"Yes Edward?" I asked a little breathless. I looked over to see Tyler giving him a death glare.
"I-uh-um I wanted to ask Tyler if there was openings in the football team?" He blushed. I could tell he just came up with a random question but I didn't understand why. The blush left as quickly as it came as him in Tyler got ingrossed in conversation about football.
I sat there the rest of lunch sitting with Tyler and Edward silently as they discussd football. Every once in a while I would catch Edward look my way. I would just smile.
When lunch ended Tyler helped me stand up from my seat as Edward glared at us. I stood for a moment waiting for Tyler to leave when I realized he wanted a goodbye kiss. He slowly began to lean his head towards mine. Is he crazy?! Edward is standing right there!! As his lips got closer I turned my head and looked at Edward, he was furious.
"Uh Edward I need to ask you something about.... Biology!" I said randomly as I grabbed Edwards hand, ignoring the spark I felt, and left a dissapionted Tyler behind.
I sighed in relief when we entered the hallway away from Tyler. Only then did I realize I was still holding Edwards hand. I quickly pulled it away and began walking away.
"Wait!" Edward called behind me. I stoped to let him catch up.
"Yes Edward?" I asked without turning to look at him.
"You had a question about Biology?" He teased. He knew I only used it as an excuse.
"Ya do you know if we can trade seats? I hate the person I have to sit next to!" I threw at him. I still felt angry for him kissing Tanya, she is a slut.
"Are you mad I imterupted your kiss with Tyler?" He asked, his voice accually sounded concerned.
"No. Accualy thank you for that. His breath smelled like fart." I pretended to gag and he laughed.
"Can I walk you to class?" He asked. He seemed a little nervouse but I just brushed the thought off.
"Sorry I don't walk with sorry I don't walk with guys who got other girls pregnate and then forced them to have an abortion." I smirked at him as his mouth droped open.
"What is that, your next rumor?!!" He accused and I just nodded yes.
He got right up to me and grabbed my face in between his hands. His breath fanned over my face and my legs felt like jello at his touch.
"You think you all tough with your friends and your popularity but if you take all that away your nothing. Your just a scared cruel little girl with no emotions and no feelings for anyone but yourself!" He spat at me. It felt like someone pored a bucked of ice water over my head. Who is he to say I don't have feelings for anyone!
I reached my hand up and slapped him across the face, hard. I could tell his cheek was red already.
"How dare you! You don't know me!" I screamed as tears leaked down my face. He reached a hand out as if to comfort me but I just pushed it away.
"Dont forget this is a war Edward Cullen." I called out to him as I walked away. I now had fresh ideas to distroy him because this war just became personal.
---Hey guys! Here is chapter 4!
I just want to send a HUGE thanks to danny2009 your advise was really helpful. Your right I shouldn't end my story because not may people read it, I need to wright it for the fans I do have :). So I'm dedicating this story to you danny2009!
I still need in answer on POV's do you guys want it as just bella'd POV or do you want everyone elses as well?---
Chapter 4
What I saw made my mouth drop open and my breath to become raggid.
Edward reached over to Tanya beside him, he interupted Tanyas and Jessicas conversation and wispered something in her ear. She giggled and turned to him. He pressed his lips onto hers. I gasped.
All the way from the other side of the lunch room I could see him stick his tounge in her mouth. Suddenly my gaze was pulled away from Edward as Tyler grabed my chin and began lowerin my mouth to his. I panicked. I don't want to kiss Tyler!! I'm embarrassed to admit I've never kissed anyone before, and I don't want Tyler to be my first.
My mouth was now a few inches from his lips. I shot a frantic glance at Alice but her Rose and Ag were to engrossed in conversation to notice. Our lips were just about to touch. I felt like screaming but I couldn't.
"Hey!" A voice made us both jump apart. I felt like jumping up and down with joy, we didn't kiss!!! I looked up to see Edward Cullen standing at our table. I then realized he was the one to interupt. My cheeks flushed a deep red.
"Yes Edward?" I asked a little breathless. I looked over to see Tyler giving him a death glare.
"I-uh-um I wanted to ask Tyler if there was openings in the football team?" He blushed. I could tell he just came up with a random question but I didn't understand why. The blush left as quickly as it came as him in Tyler got ingrossed in conversation about football.
I sat there the rest of lunch sitting with Tyler and Edward silently as they discussd football. Every once in a while I would catch Edward look my way. I would just smile.
When lunch ended Tyler helped me stand up from my seat as Edward glared at us. I stood for a moment waiting for Tyler to leave when I realized he wanted a goodbye kiss. He slowly began to lean his head towards mine. Is he crazy?! Edward is standing right there!! As his lips got closer I turned my head and looked at Edward, he was furious.
"Uh Edward I need to ask you something about.... Biology!" I said randomly as I grabbed Edwards hand, ignoring the spark I felt, and left a dissapionted Tyler behind.
I sighed in relief when we entered the hallway away from Tyler. Only then did I realize I was still holding Edwards hand. I quickly pulled it away and began walking away.
"Wait!" Edward called behind me. I stoped to let him catch up.
"Yes Edward?" I asked without turning to look at him.
"You had a question about Biology?" He teased. He knew I only used it as an excuse.
"Ya do you know if we can trade seats? I hate the person I have to sit next to!" I threw at him. I still felt angry for him kissing Tanya, she is a slut.
"Are you mad I imterupted your kiss with Tyler?" He asked, his voice accually sounded concerned.
"No. Accualy thank you for that. His breath smelled like fart." I pretended to gag and he laughed.
"Can I walk you to class?" He asked. He seemed a little nervouse but I just brushed the thought off.
"Sorry I don't walk with sorry I don't walk with guys who got other girls pregnate and then forced them to have an abortion." I smirked at him as his mouth droped open.
"What is that, your next rumor?!!" He accused and I just nodded yes.
He got right up to me and grabbed my face in between his hands. His breath fanned over my face and my legs felt like jello at his touch.
"You think you all tough with your friends and your popularity but if you take all that away your nothing. Your just a scared cruel little girl with no emotions and no feelings for anyone but yourself!" He spat at me. It felt like someone pored a bucked of ice water over my head. Who is he to say I don't have feelings for anyone!
I reached my hand up and slapped him across the face, hard. I could tell his cheek was red already.
"How dare you! You don't know me!" I screamed as tears leaked down my face. He reached a hand out as if to comfort me but I just pushed it away.
"Dont forget this is a war Edward Cullen." I called out to him as I walked away. I now had fresh ideas to distroy him because this war just became personal.
[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested
Comments & Reviews ^topOoooooo!!! This is good! If say write more but your already finished the next chapter! Lol its awesome tho! Woo! I L.O.V.E. Love it!!!  lissy365 Jan 20, 2010 23:04 reply spam aaaa!! loved it!! you're amazing! the characters are awesome! haha !! keep on writing is my message! don't stop (pleassss)
and @pinkstuff Edward wasn't mean at all, he was teaching bitchy bella a lesson.. haha!  elonor Sep 29, 2009 10:51 reply spam totally write moree i have only just finished it and wanting to read moreee =) x  bexiie--xx Aug 26, 2009 15:38 reply spam Youu should writee a pov on edward . && keep writingg moree. Loving it :)  love_yourr_smil... Aug 21, 2009 02:30 reply spam you know i thought that my turf and twilight are the same and i was stupidly wandering why you posted 6 and 7 and yhen 4 but i realised my mistake! and i wanted to read this since last night but my internet got messed up and i coul"nt! but i"m so excited you have to write more! and i have to say i"m hounered for you dedicating a chapter to me! i just wanted to thatnk you and plz write more ! i am BEGGING you! and i think about the povs you hav3e to options either 2 write from every one elses pov or just write bella and leave everyone anxious to know what happens on the other side ! both are excotong! i would say just write bella cause it would get very interesting but on the other hand a part of me wants to know what" up on the other side! but at last it"s ur choice but what ever you do JUST WRITE MORE!  nilliana Aug 21, 2009 01:29 reply spam oh and i wanna c the pov in edwards pov to c what he thinks and what his next moves r thnkszx! again!  danny2009 Aug 20, 2009 23:09 reply spam |
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